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xHeliosLv144mth
2024-07-30 20:44

It’s an ok fic, no more than that. Mc is the son of the emperor and bene gesserit and gets sent to arrakis when he’s about a couple months old, becomes fremen freedom fighter and then leader, also hates the prophecy and fights against it. Makes technology like odm gear from attack on titan, shield for the planet, etc. Grammar is barely passable, sometimes you can read it, and then other times you can’t. The person talking will be written her 10x, and then you find out it was actually a guy the whole time. It confuses me when you can’t even properly gender whoever is currently talking at the time, and makes this fic annoying to try to read and understand. Plot is just meh, reading for fun.

DUNE-A False Haerach-(SI into brother of Irulan)

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LT_Ryuu_X
LT_Ryuu_XLv4

Finally someone who sees what I see.

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AsItWasWritten
AsItWasWrittenLv4

Peak fiction, as it was written, lisan al gaib. Do not drop, we must see the golden path. My one critique is that you post too slowly, I am impatient. Your healing asoiaf fanfic was great too.

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King_Kitkat
King_KitkatLv14

PLEASE READ,I never leave reviews as they are not helpful to readers only writers but I must see this creation prosper. So far, the story has been great, with the only Grammer being the misuse of a word or two and forgetting to use the plural version instead of singular.

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CorvusThan
CorvusThanLv1

this has a great premise. i saw how on another side this story got a bit target by people critizing its"realism" and all. Which is funny when you are talking about a fictional universe in the first place... So to the author: dont listen to the trolls. You are writing a solid developing story that makes me check daily for updates!

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QBL
QBLLv4

I liked it so far. I've only watched the movies, haven't read the comics or novel, and one thing stood out to me: there are many references to Arabic culture and Muslims (words like: kazaab, al mahadi...).

3mth
Eladzha
EladzhaLv1

Good>VERY GOOD) Just give it

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that_crazy_bastard
that_crazy_bastardLv4

ok, so since it's ended I can definitively say it's absolute cinema

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LT_Ryuu_X
LT_Ryuu_XLv4

Reveal spoiler

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Marmora
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That story is great, really good. There are some mistakes, but nothing major. I just don't like the protagonist, but everything else is pretty cool.

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