If author fixes the oc character attitude and doesn’t make his mc a gay like the last one I’ll give higher score
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LIKEThere will be Yuri when they have Orgies and use some toys BUT none of them would do it without the MC nor would they develope feelings for each other. if you don't want some girls having strap on assisting the MC pleasuring the other woman then let me know. Most smut tag I'll do is this: Orgies. Maledom. Oyakodon. Sex Toys. Public sex. Roleplay (Rape play) Netori, if the guy is an Asshole. etc. Things smut tag I won't do: NTR. more specifically Netorare and Netorase. Cloning gangbang. Futa (yeah last version keeps haunting me) Gender bending. Pegging.
DaoistOfeOTA:No yuri
not about the OC character attitude everything in this is copy from somebody else story and he didn't even change anything just some characters of the two main characters of the story and then he gave him something else when he received from his starter packs and don't forget that which path he tuk and if don't remember this the same story where there only one thing is different that he got black light virus nerf version in his different story and he was incarnation of God and he has to fight his otherself which that's chapter or I think story stop in the middle didn't even and his story where it supposed to be I mean the fighting part and he was enjoying his life that's all so I think if author change should change anything that is his way of life you not make him feel and like character so you can become a hero let's see what happens
A man turning into female is gay in my eyes im not sure if he actually got with another guy but idk what else would be the point of turning female if not that
SaintArgus:How did the MC become gay? I saw it before but not in full.
The other story is this guys story just check his profile and you can see it and if it does change I’ll edit my review for others cause story seemed pretty interesting just those few points make it weird asf
Primas:not about the OC character attitude everything in this is copy from somebody else story and he didn't even change anything just some characters of the two main characters of the story and then he gave him something else when he received from his starter packs and don't forget that which path he tuk and if don't remember this the same story where there only one thing is different that he got black light virus nerf version in his different story and he was incarnation of God and he has to fight his otherself which that's chapter or I think story stop in the middle didn't even and his story where it supposed to be I mean the fighting part and he was enjoying his life that's all so I think if author change should change anything that is his way of life you not make him feel and like character so you can become a hero let's see what happens
I will say this author seems to have finally come to his senses and got rid of that god awful thing and make the fl better
BoTMaster:You saved me bro
Primas:not about the OC character attitude everything in this is copy from somebody else story and he didn't even change anything just some characters of the two main characters of the story and then he gave him something else when he received from his starter packs and don't forget that which path he tuk and if don't remember this the same story where there only one thing is different that he got black light virus nerf version in his different story and he was incarnation of God and he has to fight his otherself which that's chapter or I think story stop in the middle didn't even and his story where it supposed to be I mean the fighting part and he was enjoying his life that's all so I think if author change should change anything that is his way of life you not make him feel and like character so you can become a hero let's see what happens
It was in the previous versions of this but I asked him and he said he wont do anything like that here so it’s clear to read
Mili_Neer:If what is written in the review is true, then I hope the author will add an appropriate tag to this book. I don't really like stories where MC is gay and I wouldn't want to waste my time on one.
DaoistOfeOTA:I will say this author seems to have finally come to his senses and got rid of that god awful thing and make the fl better