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DaoistOfeOTA
DaoistOfeOTALv412mth
2024-04-16 20:37

Ladies and gents one and all it is with great happiness I can now say author has finally found his way back to the good side and gotten rid of the feminization thing AND is also changing the fl to not be so annoying anymore. Now for those are still on the fence about reading this I’ll try to summarize, mc is a poor kid from phillipines and gets the chat group through a phone his dad gets him in the group he has rias from dxd, gojo from jjk, shinobu from demon slayer, and negima from uq holder so far not really a lot has happened but from what has is mc get power mc goes to train meet thugs then fight boss of thugs where he learns his og world is supernatural. Id rate this story about a three cause the writing feels how u say sorta immature? Like makes the bad people extremely bad so u hate them and has random pov of mc fighting them in a mobs eye to seem cool but come across kinda cringe hopefully author can grow from here because this looks to be a great multiversal fic in the making so long as some changes are made

Omni-Dimensional Chat Group

Try_hard
3.7
134 Chs

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Try_hard
Try_hardAuthor

feel fre to chat me on discord to suggest ideas.

12mth
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DaoistOfeOTA
DaoistOfeOTALv4

I don’t have discord but I’ll still comment stuff alot

Try_hard:feel fre to chat me on discord to suggest ideas.
12mth
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DaoistOfeOTA
DaoistOfeOTALv4

If author fixes the oc character attitude and doesn’t make his mc a gay like the last one I’ll give higher score

1yr

Yuri_is_Ntr
Yuri_is_NtrLv5

Doesn't remember certainly, which author you are... The one who write about annoying female oc that was a total beach, that gains a lot of cheats and main character undying simpness? Well, don't do it again. Simple, right?

1yr
jinmorifan_2
jinmorifan_2Lv4

This is my review as of Chapter 17 for those desktop users. Anyways this has every problem that most cliche chat groups have; the MCs with one brain cell revealing every valuable information or futures about the Chat Group members. Let's give an example: If you or I were to wake up today and were presented with a virtual interference in which it was revealed that you were just a fictional character and that you never 'existed' in the real world, how would you feel? Someone who was solely created just to entertain a higher dimensional being which could be especially humiliating if you had a tragic backstory.... Ignoring the absurdity, let's focus on why it was a dumb move: the future information may just be a story to the MC but to the actual Group Chat members it's like an accurate prophecy that's subject to change and instead of the MC using it as a bargaining stick; you instead simply leak it for free.... without getting any compensation in advance......... A dumb MC is a no-go for me; I can handle weak-willed MC's if they eventually get their resolve but a MC who can't think about the ramifications of his actions unless their consequences reach him is not one I can bother with.

12mth
Raviel
RavielLv14

Question is the brother of Ryuu is still going to reincarnate?

12mth
Erovia
EroviaLv3

As long as this isn't like your previous fanfic It's all good and I will give you a higher rating , alright 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

12mth
BoTMaster
BoTMasterLv1

I even only kept reading until chapter 3🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢

11mth
Bob_Uchiha_XD
Bob_Uchiha_XDLv4

Multiverse chat. Mc Asian. Mc femboy. Mc very stupid. [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

10mth
ThreshGasm
ThreshGasmLv4

My only hope is that you won't go the disease corruption ..type of powers again, we've already read your story rewritten twice with the same powerset . Please at least change them !!!

12mth
The_Dark_Hydrax
The_Dark_HydraxLv4

Please update![img=coins][img=fp][img=exp]

10mth
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