Fairly well written. as the number of errors over the course of 55 chapters is within the single digits. However, there are several spots where things could have been worded differently to make better sense or flow. The characters are fairly different and the change in POV between them gives a better idea of just how confused terrified people from an earlier era would be when faced with any modern military. There is a part of me that can't help but compare it to Nihonkoku Shoukan(Summoned Japan) as it's one of my favorite primitive smack down stories. Don't get me wrong, the story so far has been great and very engaging, but there are many nuances that, when done right, can send a shiver up a military nerds spine. Radio communications etiquette, callsigns, and brevity are a big part of that as well as individual/group placement within a formation. These are just thing I would like to used more for the professional soldiers as this is their career and something they would be doing all the time. I'll end it here with "I'm not a scali-"......
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