Item: The Inner Odyssey
Rating: 5
Author: TheOtherNoble

TheOtherNobleLv410mth

2024-06-05 23:12

Eleven chapters in, and a promising start from this author! The MC is intriguing, the plot compelling, and the world background promises a lot of room for expansion on the ideas already here. MC’s trajectory is something I’m particularly interested in, as his power is not something I anticipated. I look forward to seeing how it’s used to move the story and shape the other characters’ perception of him. The author makes detailed use of imagery to paint a vivid picture of what’s happening, drawing you into the scenes with emotional depth. Rest assured I will be in comments demanding more!

The Inner Odyssey

Ash_Monarch

5.0

105 Chs

Liked by 10 people

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Ash_MonarchAuthor

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Im_LaZy_007Lv13

is this harem or Single FL?

Ash_Monarch:

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Ash_MonarchAuthor

Single FL :)

Im_LaZy_007:is this harem or Single FL?

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Im_LaZy_007Lv13

Ash_Monarch:Single FL :)

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Teddy_910Lv15

hi toni

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TheOtherNobleLv4

Hi!!

Teddy_910:hi toni

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