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RedSky_San
RedSky_SanLv146mth
2024-10-25 07:08

This story is slow. obnoxiously slow, so much so it gets me irrationally angry. The story in itself is pretty decent up until around chapter 50 where it just becomes a history lesson. Every chapter is just history with the MC coming in every now and then. if I wanted a history lesson I would've gone to school I genuinely believe almost 90% of those chapters past 50 are completely useless Not to mention the author frequently just stealing ideas and even whole plots. Like the goddesses yapping about the fate series and one of the chapters was literally 'Reaper of the drifting moon' but with a different character. There was no reason for that Honestly author, you write pretty well but stop clogging the chapters with random history. make summaries or something

Omniscience in Marvel

This_Young_Lord
3.4
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DivineLycoris12
DivineLycoris12Lv4

My idea of Omniscience is that it’s the ability to know everything. And if you go by that logic then you would know how to instantly kill everything. Also you would also know how to kill anything without lifting a finger or without any kind of special energy. It doesn’t matter if it’s not logical because you know everything. If this explanation doesn’t make sense then it’s probably because Omniscience is way beyond the comprehension of anything.

1yr

Darkleaf14
Darkleaf14Lv2

To have a true Omni then you must exist within true infinity and if you have a true Omni then you intrinsically have the other two because if you know everything you know how to have always been able to do everything unconditionally, if you can do everything you can have always had all knowledge and if you're everywhere you perceive and can do everything so this guy only has pseudo-omnicsence which is basically the same but nowhere near as OP and easier to write since it doesn't cause your story to be an infinity paradox.

1yr
Obvlion
ObvlionLv2

So mc himself is writting the plot to continue this story ..author has no plot ... copying ideas from others....poor writting....making mc mentally immature to lengthen the plot to continue the thrash.... interaction between elder goddess is so casual...it's look like some school going teens gossiping among themselves.... projecting celestial as almighty..in truth either in mcu,comics.... celestial are vulnerable...and are butchered by knull easily.... celestials are mid tier powers....author is plain lazy ..no idea of mcu or comics.... author messed up...this is dxd. World..not marvel....there re demon lords,outer gods,etc ... celestials are nothing in front of them

11mth
A_Sleepless_dream
A_Sleepless_dreamLv14

Alright good concept pretty straight forward can see where author can improve but over good job. Ch 6 is where things kinda go meh to a higher level then the sorta meh we get…. So yeah still overall it’s a good concept and a good job at what is done

1yr
Reader98555
Reader98555Lv4

7mth
This_Young_Lord
This_Young_LordAuthor

Shameless authors review here guys. Read this up. Just wanted to try out my hand on the Marvel Universe and this is what came out.

1yr
ANANTAVIJAYA1961
ANANTAVIJAYA1961Lv4

If you think its Marvel story it's not . MC has absolute intelligence yet acts like third rate but some can still like it who have never read Comics or watched Marvel movies . It's stupid beyond stupid

4mth
LordOzzy
LordOzzyLv5

Reveal spoiler

8mth
Kimura_Stacy
Kimura_StacyLv1

one of the worst and trashiest fanfics i've ever read. was the author's brain nerfed? .......... .......... .......... .......... .......... .......... .......... .......... .......... ..........

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