Review Detail of MissBlackRose in HEART OF A DEMON

The prologue itself, I was already lost of words. The way the background/setting was described, the creator did an excellent job of bringing me at the character's world as if I was really there. The first two chapters were greatly executed as well. The tension and emotions on th fl was remarkable, so precisely spot on. Then came the ml, her knight with a golden bow, rescuing her from being ripped apart by a wolf. Their meet was breathtakingly intense, yet astonishing. I love how the story goes. If there was one thing I could correct with this story, was how the way the quotations were done. The fl talking or thinking inside her mind, the quotation should be single ( ' ), not double ( " ), to prevent confusion on readers. But all in all, this would go a long mile given the stability and frequency of updates. Great start!