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2024-06-19 03:52

you HONESTLY have a wonderful book right here? why aren't you updating it? I don't get it?? your're writing is fluent and fluid enough to pull your readers into it, and even the prologue was caused a spark of expectations. the events and chapters so far are well paced with their own mysteries, and I have every reason to believe you could make a truly successful novel from this. a word of advice from a fellow webnovel author; on Webnovel effort pays. consistency is key! if you truly maintained a consistent update you would be featured and your novel would gain more exposure, even a contract offer isn't far off the way i see it. all it need so far is a good book cover, the synopsis and prologue are good to go in my opinion. a nice cover, and your're set.

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Prinxy
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Thanks for the advice

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You know it’s a winner when readers are calling for more!

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