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2024-04-11 04:54

This is really a unique work than other fiction, just need to improve the flow of the story

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Thank you very much. I will correct my mistake. I suppose I was flowing with too much idea that I rushed to complete the story without better flow. Anyway, thank you very much.

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I don't understand what gender the main character is? (sorry)

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