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Joseph04
Joseph04Lv410mth
2024-05-18 14:04

In the beginning much of the story is a play by play of the original with only a few extra dialogues added. This continues until just before the attack on the ogre village, which is around chapter 14, at which point the plot that the author has finally decided to show is getting heavily forced to work with little to no reason as to why or how it fits in or works. It has the correct components to be a good story if only the author would stop heavily forcing the plot to just work. You aren't Todd Howard my guy.

The Time I Reincarnated as the King of Knights?!

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4.2
97 Chs

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The_Dark_Hydrax
The_Dark_HydraxLv4

Please don't drop and continue updating!

11mth

Heavy_Space
Heavy_SpaceLv4

she plays second fiddle to rimuru, i was expecting a kingdom building or something in those lines(meaning she makes her own kingdom,etc) but she's just being a general to rimuru and becomes his plot Armor....

10mth
Debesh_Samanta
Debesh_SamantaLv1

She got no other benefits from combining 3 most powerful Artoria pendragon versions other than just becoming a God-dragon hybrid. I was expecting MC will have Artoria's skill sets. But she had to buy every skills and weapon, then what was the point of the random draw. Also the dialogue between MC with Rimuru feels like written by a 10 years old

10mth
ghost_316x
ghost_316xLv4

I rated this five stars because he choose the best version of artoria

11mth
Andrew_Edwards_0410
Andrew_Edwards_0410Lv14

please don't drop, I love stories where the MC becomes Artotia and there's not enough good tensura fanfics. this is the best of both worlds.

11mth
Supper_mega
Supper_megaLv4

people just give this a five star because it's artoria in tensura and of course people who like a mc that has no goal in mind and just follow the mc(rimuru) around

10mth
GaryDaSnaiI
GaryDaSnaiILv4

Very good start honestly so much better than other tensura fics hard to find one that isn’t a 1 for 1 plot line even tho this is close it’s still better than others for the character development please don’t drop this author Also where’s her horse ain’t she supposed to have her horse?

11mth
Estelem_Shelym
Estelem_ShelymLv13

Eu estava interessada. Mas quando vi a Tag Yuri. Desisti. Não sou fã de Yuri👍____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

11mth
SpyTL
SpyTLLv13

Has artoria in it. Emiya aproves Best girl no matter where 5 stars

10mth
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