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Apollyon_
Apollyon_Lv46mth
2024-10-18 05:25

Author lost focus. The story had a good premise and world building but it feels like the author decided to change everything partway through the ua arc didn’t even make it to the usj equivalent before the entire world was turned into an apocalypse and the mc technically died and was reborn again.

MHA Paragon: Version 2.0

Black_Paladyn
4.8
52 Chs

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John_Clamble
John_ClambleLv13

Yeah I was thinking the same thing, the story had such a good premise and was moving along nice before randomly everything was dropped. After being reborn he's this abyssal, creature, thing, that's taking the shape of a human? And the day of his return a girl he had maybe 3-4 conversations with is ready to lose their virginity? Unfortunately I am completely unable to follow the reasoning behind this - its a shame because the writing quality is so good yet the plot development is poor. Dropping as writing of this comment.

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Amazing, It's really a good fanfiction please don't drop it.

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AngelShadow2
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Boss man made a really good fanfic, would definitely recommend also boss please release the bonus chapters thx. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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TheWaffleMonarch
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Really like where this is going and looking forward to more chapters bro👍

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Zailo95
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I don’t have anything fancy to say but if you want a au mha story with more enemies than in the original story then you should give this fic a try. It’s pretty good so far.

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AdolfHipster1945
AdolfHipster1945Lv5

Honestly, good fucking story, love that the guy just doesnt know about the world at all and his abilities are rather unique and fun to read in a fight, the writings fucking great, updates great (for now at least chapter 40) Story development is probably my favourite part, its different not a complete AU but it throws a curveballs once in a while so you dont know what to expect, character design is alright i guess, would love more images to be honest in the chapter comments, world background is typical BNHA but he does have a unique backgroud (A/E different than the typical orphan or something) *Light Spoiler* Where is my Greg Nomu from USJ incident? Is he safe? Is he alright? Author man did the good Greg Nomu go to the big Laboratory in the sky?

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albert31
albert31Lv2

It's soo good and really original novel.

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Unsightly
UnsightlyLv3

Hello once again, feeble humans! It is I, your favorite (and only) Hell's Prince! For the less... educated of you... I'll introduce myself, my name is Lucifer Morningstar. In my spare time I like to reincarnate mortals into worlds of fiction. You and whatever number of beings you have in your dwelling have been lucky enough to witness a masterpiece- I've conjured one HELL of a show for you and I don't care if you're ready for it. (Rewrite of the starting paragraph and I'm too lazy to do the rest

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Judy_Morgan_5854
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Really good fan fiction, love the idea for the story. Keep up the good work.

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CHEON_MA
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The story is great and has potential. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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Seven_deadly_sins_
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I like it the character is a versatile character I get carried away making them to strong or adding more powers

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