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Quality = OK-ish. There are plenty of typos and odd sentence structures in the majority of the chapters up to chapter 17. It's understandable, yes, but it's dumbed down so much that every logical action is replaced by the whimsical stereotype of the typical shonen protagonist who wants to bang his sister for some god-for-sake reason. -Stability: Ok. Story Development: There's lots to say about that, but it's mainly summarized in how I described the quality of the fic. Each chapter gives him a magnificent power boost, but the MC never improves. His actions grow dumber and dumber the further in you get. -Character Design: Meh, MC acts like he's afraid to go out the front door in fear of being crushed by almighty entities. -World Background: Cool, MC's world is DC, yet what does that mean? Oh, here's a random ass quest to go to a random world, almost like his chat group's worlds doesn't exist, and he has to cover grounds in a world that comes out of absolutely nowhere. Overall, this fanfic is overrated and does not belong in the top charts where it currently is. The plot is a lazy amalgamation of mixed-mashed worlds, and the author can't nail a single original character personality. They all go along like it is an acid-induced dreamscape where the MC collects his harem of useless nobodies because he needs to collect women en masse. -Harsh? Nah, especially not when the author wants to get paid for this drivel through p@treon.

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