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Jack_Alexander24
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Ngl, this story is quite immersive, its got those kingdom building vibe, reincarnation, OP cheat, Wholesome Family, fantasy, and other all those mainstream genres out there, I feel like there’s no harem here cuz the females are not that adorable but nevertheless competent, that’s more amazing than those weak females who just stands there and then have minimal character development, oh and though I say they are competent, I did not mean those females that are OVERLY competent in which they have FLAWS that’s much to be desired, like those obsessive yandere girls or those very assertive ho*s. One thing to point out is that it’s not perfect, there are holes from here and there which makes the world building incomplete, the Author has not yet solidified the foundation of the story and it mainly focused on MC’s POV for like 90%. and 10% are to other extra. I would like for the author to balance the different sides to give us the clear image of the whole story. I would like to learn the the MC’s family, the Nobles, the Royalty, and much more, yet the author did not include such information in the initial chapters where MC was learning, it just skipped like A LOT. The author even skipped where he got those materials for financial and he only highlighted one battle lol, so much skipperoo in this story lol, that’s why I said there are holes to the story. There are no costs in some skills, and a certain skill is really Overpowered despite only have a Rating A in which mc abuses all the time. The only saving grace why this novel is good because it has good depth to it despite being there being many plot holes. But I think author can readjust such story and look forward to it when he revise this story cuz its really good, hope he can keep going and stay strong!💪

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