There was a problem with the fanfic. I had to delete it before Re-publishing it.

(CH8) its written well, mistakes with spelling/grammar are almost non-existent. I feel like the author has accurately captured Tanya as a character and is faithful in his portrayal of her. Story development is where I might find issue later on but its hard to see where everything is going given there being only 8 chapters. Author might go the way of the original anime and make Tanya a front line military commander or perhaps will try something else. hard to say, but its promising so far.

The only real problem is that there isn’t enough, one of the only pieces that seem to nail Tanya’s personality. The multiple POVs work well to show how Tanya reads situations differently then “the normal” characters.

Woow I really love that premise of the story. Keep going also author-san ❤️❤️

I love the story so far. I only wish for more chapters.

Tanya, in the Imperialistic Fire Nation Military. I can definitely wait for chapters!

rare to see fanfics that portray Tanya as who she actually is, rather than a made up version that fit the whole "cute girl doing cute things" deal

Peakest peak to ever peak on this wn. I doubted at first but the writing quality in this fic is incredible, it stays true to the character Tanya at hand and doesn’t deviate at all from what the original would do in this situation. Development of the story is perfect and really hammers the themes of the show perfectly when put against the themes and ideals of Tanya. Absolute peak

This work gets Tanya's personality (youjo senki/mc) right, the only change in her personality that I've noticed so far (chap 14) is that she really values ​​friendships (only about 4, which are important figures) apart from that the plot is similar like the original work, but in the avatar world (and so far it is well done)