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NelsonAyala
NelsonAyalaLv410mth
2024-06-06 13:40

la historia avanza demasiado rápido para la trama,aun asi es buena. es novedoso,desde un ángulo diferente al que estoy acostumbrado.lo cual me fascina y atrae. en cuando a su desarrollo de personaje, no se puede saber claramente. ya que avanza rapido la historia. es refrescante leer este tipo de historia,ya que se aprovecha de las oportunidades adecuadamente. la lógica no existe por lo que la califico por mi disfrute y ya.

becoming Dipper in Gravity falls isn’t So bad ,is it??

Herohero
4.5
36 Chs

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Herohero
HeroheroAuthor

Thank SO MUCH , I also think that the plot is little quickly . I think it's due to my inexperience and I also find that dipper is the least well written among my 3 seriously written fanfics

10mth
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Diosazura599
Diosazura599Lv3

Gravity Fall. ........................................................................................................................................................................

1yr

Herohero
HeroheroAuthor

I will give myself 5 stars because I am sure I will do my best not to disappoint the readers, and I also want to inform you that Dipper will not be a saint ,So he will sometimes do questionable acts (experiment on intelligent humanoid beings) and if you want to know more you have to read it👍

1yr
DaoistZpE06Z
DaoistZpE06ZLv1

One of the rare gravity falls fanfics that isn't abandoned, and I recommend it. The protagonist is not a dog in heat chasing a harem, he just wants to see how far he can go in this world(multiverse)

1yr
Sakuta_01003
Sakuta_01003Lv2

Give him the powers of Charro Negro from the 'Las Leyendas' movies

12mth
DaoistyQNGiX
DaoistyQNGiXLv14

Reveal spoiler

9mth
Random_Entity
Random_EntityLv4

Hmmmmm a Gravity Falls fanfic on Webnovel(that’s not dropped), Interesting…

1yr
NewArk_0
NewArk_0Lv4

good book for a start, I recommend a read guys.

1yr
Khalderas
KhalderasLv4

honestly don't understand all the five star reviews... this work has literally no personality at all. The author took away all personality from the setting and turned it into a to do list. The MC just goes from task to task without stopping, not even in a fun way. pretty much every plot point is solved in one single chapter so there's literally no build-up so the ending has no time to be satisfying at all. there's little to no character interactions, at all, the MC has barely spoken with the characters and when he does, it's basically one or two sentences. The MC has little to no personality at all, he acts and talks like a robot which goes hand in hand with the to do list style of this fic. he literally says everything in his sentences: 'I'm not a thief, I just want to use your influence, I have strength and money'. this is basically how he always talks with everyone. all in all, promising at first but terribly disappointing, would not recommend at all

9mth
Daoist8KliAr
Daoist8KliArLv1

Mas cap aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

1yr
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