The story feels off. It's not bad or anything, but the interactions and world-building feels strange. It doesn't seem like it is written in DXD and yet it is.
Yea, I didn't add a lot of the background stuff. the writing is more focused on the characters, their thoughts than the surrounding. It's on purpose so i can write easier. after all, i wanna turn off my brain and just write whatever that came up in my mind.