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The story feels off. It's not bad or anything, but the interactions and world-building feels strange. It doesn't seem like it is written in DXD and yet it is.

I am secretly a 12th Dimensional Eldritch God

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Yea, I didn't add a lot of the background stuff. the writing is more focused on the characters, their thoughts than the surrounding. It's on purpose so i can write easier. after all, i wanna turn off my brain and just write whatever that came up in my mind.