Review Detail of False_Architect in Labyrinth of Ten Thousand

Shameless [Author] here. It has been a year since I did my first book [Surviving In My Own Unpublished Novel], which has been dropped (though I marked it as ambiguously completed since I have a plan for it in the future). By the way, the following below's a brief description of what this novel's about and whatnot: Writing Quality [—] — English isn't my first language, so bear with it if there's something you cannot comprehend. I am open for "constructive criticism", but no hate. Story Development [—] — Well, according to the Synopsis, it's about mysterious gargantuan pyramids that appeared out of nowhere. The story would revolve around their mysteries as the world slowly unfolds to the reality of what was lost. Character Design [—] — I am poor as hell, so I'll live to the readers' imagination how my beloved [Characters] looks like. On the other hand, about the main character of this novel, here's something I can say... He's someone who will do anything to achieve his goals, no matter the cost. Sounds familiar? Updating Stability [—] — Support me my fellow readers, it will add in my motivation to see this story to the end (though it has already been decided :P), so throw out that Power Stones, Golden Tickets, and if ever some precious [Gifts]. World Background [—] — The world revolves around a single continent named Mazendria. There are Seven Churches and Seven Deities in this world, as well as the mysterious existence of Seven Labyrinth of Wonders. This isn't spoilers since you'll be able to read them in early chapters. Anyway. READERS, Please support my work. Also, any reasonable and answerable questions, just put them in the comments of this review. THANK YOU—! Oridi.