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I really like the concept of the story. I just hate his name i mean really Harry potter Williams the ninja -__-

great potential to be one of the best. keep going 👍

This author is known to nerf all his MCs. Here too he nerfs the character very badly. He gives him uzumaki bloodline but the chakra increase after gaining the bloodline is only 4 times whereas normally it is 100 times stated in the manga. He still didn't get the bloodline completely just 50 percent. If you want a story with a good shinobi with powers then this isn't for you. He will also abandon this novel like all others he did in around 3 months. He may also delete this review. After chapter 49.

I hope it creates a Ninja Faction something like the League of Assassins. I'm enjoying the way the story is going, I hope you continue it. (Google translate)

Usually I don't write reviews to complain, I just forget about it and remove from my library. But man this mc is dumb af. And the forced plots and everything, making me angry after each chapter. I'm sorry author bro, if you want to delete the review do it. I'm out ... It's actually 1 star review, but I didn't wanna make author feel bad more.

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GPTness can get a bit much, but it's an okay read that has it's moments. Filler text for character count is a pain to create but alas, I really said all I had to say

Overall good, I recommend reading the first 20 Chapters and then dropping it, or someone else could use the first 20 chapters as a template for the concept and ignore anything after that. Was a great read, and I highly anticipated what would happen next, at least until chapter 20, then it all went downhill in quality and creativity. Hope to see another fic that's like the first 20 chapters but actually continues phenomenally!

The story is very good. Really very good. The protagonist is well developed and his progress, although slow, is just right. He still has 4 years before the events of 'Avengers 1' and he won't even participate, since he kind of can't. The only thing I have to complain about, for lack of a better word, is that some chapters are very short and some events that could be summarized in 1 or two chapters last longer. The time jumps are short. From time to time, you can skip 3 months and then say what was done in that time. I won't complain. So, the story is perfect. Hope you don't mess up, huh? There is. One suggestion from me is that he starts going after HYDRA bases or after the worst human beings in the world. Drug dealers, murderers, dictators and others. And for the costume, although I love Akatsuki's outfit, I would like to see him dressed as Red Hood with the red cloud symbol on the back. That's my assessment. To be continued. Please.