This is a great One Piece fanfic, I love it! 👍 It has a great plot/storyline and decent translation/English (it's a Chinese translation so it's a little confusing, but overall I understand it). I like stories like this where the MC is not a dog or Luffy's servant, I also like his character and personality, keep it up

The PLOT IS GOOD(Mc might appear stupid), system always handles him , Character design is not that good as you expect it's just ok, the power level is JUST a little unstable because 10% of siatama power can litrally make him 5th Yonko ( in orignal, siatama sneeze DESTROYED JUPITER....so no you know)

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I'll give this story 5 stars for now author keep it up

"I didn't expect you have this much strength" "Your insight is truly profound!" Yep, pretty obvious that this one indeed has Chinese vibes, so prepare yourself for the cringe before reading it. Not only that, things change a lot here, for example one year and a half before canon start, Usopp somehow was not in the Island. Same time frame, Shanks was in the Windmill village, ofc Luffy was in there as well. Also, Shanks didn't know Ace is Roger's son, while the Ace novel said otherwise. Basically it's semi-AU One Piece with Chinese vibes here and there, and the more MC messed up the main story, the more points he gains

BTW is this an original or translated if translated than can you tell me it's name?

Great fanfic. Author, please kindly let me know the original name. I want to read more mtl is also okay. Just let me know the name.

the first few chapters might be a bit unbearable. But, if you endure it 'till chapter 8, it'll become great! give it a try!

Finally the fanfiction I've always thought of. The author, I give the highest score for only one idea. Please don't give up this story and make it interesting

Translation good, there is no grammar problem, the story too even though the MC too OP with comedy it doesn't look boring