Review Detail of Sea_Light in Souls in Teyvat
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Hello author, I have finished reading the latest chapter of this story and wanted to leave some thoughts. First of all, I need to say that I've never played Genshin Impact before, but I have read so many fanfics of it that I can understand the setting and characters quite specifically. And from my experience, this is definitely one of the Genshin fics that makes me the most satisfied. As I said, about the plot, this story has a fairly slow pace, the characters that interact with the MC are very realistic, and the MC's personality is also quite interesting to me. Next is what most Webnovel readers are interested in: the Harem. This is definitely a very difficult topic to write about because the author needs to build the emotional path between the characters as logically as possible. There was even a reader who literally recommended 99% of the Genshin girls into the MC's harem. It's very cringe. In my opinion, A good harem is the harem with about 4-5 people, more than that will bore the readers.
Souls in Teyvat
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Another thing I agree with the author is the time it takes for the girls to develop feelings. I certainly don't want to read a story where a couple kisses and makes love in the first chapter. Why do people like such quick love? I want a romcom story where MC and FMC realize their feelings for each other at the end of the story. And this story pleased me very much.
But in the end I only gave it 4 stars. Because the author has a strange typing habit, you always write " ?. ". If it is a question, use "?", otherwise use "." , no one will write them together. Although it's not a big deal, it can sometimes be uncomfortable to read. Finally, this review is written using Google translate, so please forgive me if there are things you don't understand. Thank you.
I appreciate the honest review. I will try to correct that habit from now on. But yes, it's a very slow novel not many people will like, it's refreshing to hear someone realize and appreciate it.
Sea_Light:But in the end I only gave it 4 stars. Because the author has a strange typing habit, you always write " ?. ". If it is a question, use "?", otherwise use "." , no one will write them together. Although it's not a big deal, it can sometimes be uncomfortable to read. Finally, this review is written using Google translate, so please forgive me if there are things you don't understand. Thank you.