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Brain_Hobyane
Brain_HobyaneLv212mth
2024-05-13 01:52

it's really good but it has a lot if grammatical mistakes.plsss fix it

My Horror System {I reincarnated OP with a Horror System}

AuthorEriElegbede
4.6
146 Chs

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AuthorEriElegbede
AuthorEriElegbedeAuthor

Sorry for the inconveniences I will do that as soon as I can. Thanks for the review

12mth
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AuthorEriElegbede
AuthorEriElegbedeAuthor

Rating myself 5 stars to show how I worked hard on this book. Please collect and give it a read.

1yr

FantasyLord
FantasyLordLv13

Great work, definitely going into my library. It's like your brain is really getting sucked up in all the action and suspense. Also great build up and characterization you can really feel the work pur into it... 馃憤馃拵馃拵

11mth
ReaderSanta
ReaderSantaLv12

Can't believe I started reading an original book and loved it! I normal read fanfiction but this has currently stomped to my number one! Please Author I need more Chapter! I need to better grasp this awesome plot!

1yr
Jinxed_Mayhem
Jinxed_MayhemLv2

Welcome to the world where everything is dead! No civilization and humans are on the menu! This book is serving Eri on the plate I wanna eat more him! more Chapters

1yr
THEATK
THEATKLv3

now I don't know what I'll do if my childhood fears came to actualization 馃槱 but you see I love the way Eri is progressing, something I'd love to see is how well he does when he gets to affiliate with other people.

1yr
Ukato07
Ukato07Lv1

I had problems in many places because of grammatical errors, other than that it didn't draw me in enough, of course everyone's taste is different, it may not suit me, it may suit someone else, try it anyway, there aren't many sections. The story development wasn't enough. I like characters who are dedicated to getting stronger, characters who use all the opportunities they can and forcefully allocate what they want from the system. Unfortunately, these features weren't enough in this series. I've read about 6 to 7 novels so far. Even though it's in the last place among them, it's not bad because I've generally tried to read the most refined novels on the market. I wish the author success. Best regards, Alperen/Ukato

1mth
Dplank
DplankLv2

This novel is the very best of the best! I have to just say this from being trapped in his fears to growing into a Blood sucking MC! The feeling this novel gives me is the very best

1yr
Chika_Ebuka
Chika_EbukaLv3

Bro when i saw the statement i sell 'Akara' ,I know you were my Igbo brother the novel is captivating,It got me hooked keep it up 馃憤

11mth
ReaderSanta
ReaderSantaLv12

Back and reading My Horror System . it's got me hooked again with the story and action sequence, just like every other genre but makes them unique and feel much better. I love this novel . just want the writer to improve on quality.

11mth
AncientAbyss
AncientAbyssLv15

The grammar is horrible so it's hard to get into for me.

7mth
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