webnovel
Cody_Pack
Cody_PackLv156mth
2024-10-19 10:47

I don't know why but I find myself confused sometimes reading so far. for some reason I can't pin point exactly what it is but I'm enjoying what I'm able to grasp so far and keeping up the reading. idk if it's the Grammer, spelling, way the transitions to iner monolog and verbal are used but man it's confusing. as I said though I'm enjoying what iv gotten so far and keeping on reading. Hopefully gets easier. idk if it's the editor or self edited but since I'm early into the chapters as of commenting Hopefully mistakes have been corrected cause I have a feeling this is gonna be a banger of a read if author keeps at it and not abandon it.

Demon Lord: Erotic Adventure in Another World

TheDragonSlayer
4.8
484 Chs

Liked by 1 people

LIKE
Replies3
TheDragonSlayer
TheDragonSlayerAuthor

Thank you for the review, I honestly cannot thank you enough. Because of a glitch on the APP sometimes Italic and Bold text doesn't show up in the reader! I had stopped using this later in the novel, but early on I completely forgot and thus a large chunk of the chapters was missing completely, as for grammar I use two different tools to check for issues and there didn't seem to be anything major, and the spelling was a few minor slips due to haste! I appreciate the feedback because it at lease allowed me to notice just how bad it looks when someone reads and they didn't show. (My new phone cannot see the italics or bold when reading so it looks even worse than normal as I used italic and bold a lot for inner thoughts and other things early on!)

6mth
Cody_Pack
Cody_PackLv15

I'm in the 200s chapters almost all caught up. things have gotten very much more easier to follow a long while ago in the early 20 chapters. it makes me sad already about to catch up but I'm so very much looking forward to ready more. coins much worth spent. keep up the good work and thanks very much for responding. you might actually be the first author to personally respond to my comments in chapters out of many books iv read or currently reading. keep up the great work and stay healthy

5mth
1
TheDragonSlayer
TheDragonSlayerAuthor

Haha, it's my pleasure. If I didn't read your comments then my book might never have gotten fixed in the earlier chapters. Though I don't have the time to re-write them in my improved style from the later chapters. Now at least i've fixed the error that many people using the app suffered due to that issue. I will do my best to keep healthy and improve with each new chapter! Thanks for reading, it is my pleasure and honour you enjoyed Demon lord so far!

Cody_Pack:I'm in the 200s chapters almost all caught up. things have gotten very much more easier to follow a long while ago in the early 20 chapters. it makes me sad already about to catch up but I'm so very much looking forward to ready more. coins much worth spent. keep up the good work and thanks very much for responding. you might actually be the first author to personally respond to my comments in chapters out of many books iv read or currently reading. keep up the great work and stay healthy
5mth
Other Reviews
Lapllace
LapllaceLv12

Everything is written so strangely; there are many events happening at once, yet it feels like nothing is really happening. It lacks so many details, and the main character comes across as foolish because of his actions. For example, in the first chapters about the summoning: he’s summoned but doesn’t even notice, doesn’t realize he’s in a huge castle instead of a classroom, introduces himself without noticing he’s standing away from his classmates, and then there’s no description of his thoughts on being summoned or suddenly being in another world. He starts analyzing the people around him and the king, but no real information about his analysis is provided. During his first night in the castle, we get nothing about how he got there, his thoughts, nothing. Then this fox character shows up, and everything becomes too random. It feels like trying to retell a dream but without remembering enough details, creating a jumbled mess of random information. That analogy perfectly describes the first chapters of this novel, and I won’t be reading any further.

5mth

Daoist57BLYp
Daoist57BLYpLv14

This book it’s great, it keeps getting better a it goes, I recommend it. Ps don’t stop reading until the 40+ chapter and you’ll understand. Author pls don’t drop it. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

9mth
Adam_Br
Adam_BrLv14

When it showed in my recommendations I decided to give it a try and I don’t regret it. It’s quite good. I have high hopes for this novel. I rarely start to read novels that have less than 300-400 chapters that aren’t finished. Author plz don’t drop this I hope to read it for a long time;)

9mth
Locke039
Locke039Lv15

I just realized you are the authors who is writing Devouring Monarch as well. 😁 I read that one everyday too. I must say, I am enjoying this novel better. Keep it up!

8mth
STBull100
STBull100Lv15

Really great book so far! The characters are engaging and the overall story is well though out and written

10mth
CHAOS_FOOLISH
CHAOS_FOOLISHLv13

Author! Could you tell me how many chapters the work will have, please? ................................................

14d
SWORDGOD_ETERNITY
SWORDGOD_ETERNITYLv4

author do you have discord..............

8mth
Patrick_Stoudamire
Patrick_StoudamireLv4

What an amazing read! Character building is exceptional with the side characters written so well you remember them! I have read 100s of random novels and this take of a berserk heavy weapon wielding physcopath is refreshing! Author writes really well and gives you a ton of chapters free to get you hooked! A must read if you are into Barbarian Blood Shed!

9mth
Zavia_Thompson_4969
Zavia_Thompson_4969Lv4

i cant find a problem its good and i love it

9mth
Sushitrashs
SushitrashsLv15

The book is good, although it starts a bit wonky with many events being all over the place and random stuff pops here na d there… The writing picks ups after the initial 30 chaps which leads into a plot twist that makes the book much more enjoyable 👍 I recommend reading the first 35 chaps before deciding to drop or not. 4/5✨⭐️

1mth
Related Stories

Young Master's PoV: Woke Up As A Villain In A Game One Day

"Now you see?" she shouted in a mix of annoyance and disappointment. "You can't outsmart Scrients! They're the most intelligent beings across the two realms." "You're right," I muttered, averting my gaze with a heavy sigh. "I made a mistake. I was too arrogant to think that a mere human like me could fool them." —BOOM!! "Heik! Wh-What was that?" "Hmm? I'm not sure. Maybe you should go and ask the most intelligent beings across the two realms. Oh wait, you can't. I killed them all.” ______ My name is Samael Kaizer Theosbane. On the last day of high school, I got into a fight with a kid I used to bully. It was a stupid, pointless scuffle, and in the middle of it, I tripped and hit my head on a rock. That’s when the memories came flooding in - the memories of another life, of a different world. Suddenly, everything made a twisted kind of sense. I realized two things. First, I was in a game I used to play in my past life. Second, I was a villain. A villain! Not the cool and mysterious kind, either. No, my destiny was to be manipulated and die a dog's death! I was the worst type of cliché: an ungrateful, privileged, insufferable young master. The sort you'd find in those poorly written fantasy stories. The kind everyone hates — a snobby brat from a powerful noble family who thinks he owns the world just because he was born with a silver spoon lodged in his mouth. You know the type. The one the hero beats to a pulp to prove his worth. Yeah, I was that guy. And the hero? The hero was the kid I’d been bullying all this time. The same one I got into a fight with. He was the supposed savior of this damned world. A world teetering on the edge of destruction, beset by wars, calamities, and a grim future that only I knew. And at the end of it all, the final antagonist of the game, the undefeatable boss… the Spirit King, was waiting. But could I even make it to the end? Could I conquer a game where defeat was the only certainty? A game that was now my reality! “Ah, fuck it.” I had no idea if I could, but I sure as hell was going to try. Extorting extras, manipulating main characters, twisting the story to my advantage, stealing the hero’s cheat items, killing villains before they could become threats - nothing was beneath me. Would the main characters be affected? Who cares! Would the story change? Even better! All I cared about was me—my survival, my life, my choices. “I will live this life with no regrets.” …But as I soon discovered, fate was not easily changed. And the price of altering one's destiny was steep. ========== Discord Server: https://discord.gg/VjFQtDUaTR

The_One_Who_Was · Fantasy
4.7
183 Chs

Affinity:Chaos

"Grey, elemental affinity, zero" The Elder announced the result loudly On hearing this, it was like a bolt of lightning struck Grey, he stood there dumbfounded and just stared at the Elder. Shocked voices could be heard from the people and there was some which were also filled with scorn. Grey stood dazed amidst all the noises without any reactions. One word was constantly reverberating in his head, 'How?'. 'Why, why did this happen to me?' Grey asked himself over and over again **************** Unbeknownst to Grey, something greater lies in wait in his body.... *************** Check out the book, leave a review after reading, and also your powerstones. Hope you enjoy this, and Thanks for reading ^_^ P.S: When I started this book I had zero writing experience, so the first chapters aren't that great, although, my writing quality has improved over time. Also, English isn't my first language, so there are some instances where my choice of words are not good enough for what I'm trying to portray. A heads up, the book will be using a medieval setting. My world building is not the best, but it gets better over time, so bear with me on the early chapters! P.S: Cover art not mine I just edited it. If you're the owner and want me to take it down you can notify me. Other novel: Lunar:Secret Guardians Check it out as well! Discord Server: https://discord.gg/gs68a4ZzaN

Springs_Halo · Fantasy
4.3
1822 Chs

Necromancer Of The Shadows

"I should have stayed home and played video games." This was Ray's last thought before darkness engulfed him after he was hit by a car. But surprisingly, instead of finding himself before the gates of hell after dying, Ray found out he was transmigrated into another world. The world Ray was transmigrated to was called Arora World, a place where you can use different kinds of skills, magic, and even acquire powerful classes. Ray found himself in the body of a young boy named Evan, who was studying in a hunter academy after awakening his abilities at the age of fourteen. At first, Ray was happy that he was transmigrated into the body of someone who had awakened his abilities and could use the magic he always wanted to use. However, as Ray went through Evan's memories, he finally realized that everything was not as simple as he had expected. Evan had a unique physique that didn't allow him to increase his power like other people. Because of this useless unique physique, Evan was the weakest hunter in the entire academy. And that was not all; the more Ray looked at Evan's memories, the more he realized just how troublesome his situation was. "I know I entered this body without buying a ticket, but isn't this too much?" Ray said in a depressed voice after going through Evan's memories. Will Ray be able to survive in this new world? Is the physique of his new body really useless? Join Ray on his adventure to find out.

Zero_writer · Fantasy
4.3
1334 Chs

Primordial Villain with a Slave Harem

Quinlan, a simple office worker finds himself transmigrated to an extremely dangerous fantasy land as a level 1 Commoner with nothing to his name but his wits - and a unique gift that accompanied his teleportation. No one in Thalorind could have predicted that this unassuming arrival would one day rise to the top, redefining the very meaning of the term 'power'... And that he may have achieved said result by joining a criminal organization and clawing his way through its ranks. In the beginning, Quinlan was painfully weak and alone but thanks to his severe trust issues, joining a team was... hard. However, he soon noticed that a lot of people have collars around their necks in this world... People that couldn't exactly betray him. Follow Quinlan's journey as he grows in strength, amasses wealth, fights to the death, and meets lovely ladies. ... Discord: https://discord.gg/bjunEkswQ3 ... Disclaimer: I'd received a few complaints from some readers that my MC is not a real villain, and I have to agree; if you're looking for some complete psycho MC who burns random farmer villages down just for fun then don't read. The MC is a ruthless man who does evil things from time to time, but only to his enemies or those he considers to be true scum. He gains no joy from tormenting strangers. Also don't read if you want a story about buying s*x slaves and r*ping them, that doesn't happen in this novel. He will treat the women he wants to be with as if they were normal people, whether they're slaves or not.

NecroBin · Fantasy
4.6
736 Chs

Reborn as an Evolving Space Monster: Harem Of Otherworldly Beauties

Reborn as an Evolving Space Monster. The Paru is a peculiar Species that can be found billions of light-years away from Earth, on a small planet covered by strange minerals and crystals. The Parus are peaceful, as they can eat anything. From earth, to minerals, all suits their tastes. Why would such a peaceful Species develop the ability to Evolve by Devouring? The Parus Devour the minerals and crystals, which allow their shells to grow tougher and tougher every day. What happens when a person is Reborn as a Paru? What happens when a Paru isn't seeking a peaceful life, but one filled with adventure, adrenaline-pumping fights, and otherworldly beauties? The peaceful Species turns into a Calamity feared by this universe, and the next. https://discord.gg/uy6KdtBTn2

Luna_J006 · Fantasy
4.6
330 Chs

An Extra’s Rise in an Eroge

Arthur, an avid gamer, accepts his friend’s dare to beat an infamous eroge game that no one has ever completed. The problem? The game is designed to trap players in endless smut scenes, with every decision leading to the same outcome: more smut scenes, world destruction and game over. After countless failed attempts and growing frustration, Arthur takes to the game's community forum, venting his anger at the developers. To his shock, he receives a cryptic response from the developer challenging him to find a different ending. Moments later, Arthur is pulled into the game itself, awakening in the body of an unremarkable extra. Arthur finds himself embodying the very lifestyle he once despised—fooling around at every turn and getting swept up in the woman's seductive temptations. Can Arthur resist the game’s temptations, uncover hidden paths, and finally break free? Or will he become yet another player lost to its endless scenes? or he will do both? Follow Arthur’s journey for a fresh story filled with humor, plot twists, and concepts you won’t find elsewhere. This novel includes incest, so if that's something you're uncomfortable with, you may want to avoid it. [Warning: Mature content R-18 ] Tags:- Harem, Op Mc, smut, romance, Milfs, Virgins, Netori, Succubus, Vampires, Elves, Princesses, Gilfs, Demonesses, Angels, Goddesses, Dragons, Phoenixes, Dryads, long seggs scenes, System, and many more. Release Schedule & Support: Chapter Releases: 2 daily chapters, each with 1k+ words. Support & Bonuses: I'm newly contracted and part of the win-win program! Privilege purchases, gifts, golden tickets, power stones, collections, and especially comments are greatly appreciated and keep me motivated. Give this a try—it’s a story that promises surprises at every turn, as long as you make it through the beginning!

Sensual_Sage · Fantasy
4.3
230 Chs
Login