Item: After signing in for Ten years, Uchiha begged me to come out .
Rating: 5
Author: ACDPQS

ACDPQSLv149mth

2024-04-02 23:27

There are 2 spelling mistakes that I see in the title alone. This tells me that the story will not be much better. I wish you, the author, nothing but the best. A little tip that I do in the story I write: before publishing a chapter, or title for that matter, input the text into ChatGPT and say 'correct this'.

After signing in for Ten years, Uchiha begged me to come out .

Sumit_Bhamer

4.3

56 Chs

Liked by 19 people

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ACDPQSLv14

The mistakes are: singing ==> signing Uchia ==> Uchiha

9mth

Sumit_BhamerAuthor

Thanks for your tip. English is not my main language but thank you for your advice

9mth

ACDPQSLv14

No problem, it's not mine either. I'll check out your novel once it has reached 10+ chapters.

Sumit_Bhamer:Thanks for your tip. English is not my main language but thank you for your advice

9mth

Sumit_BhamerAuthor

okay

ACDPQS:No problem, it's not mine either. I'll check out your novel once it has reached 10+ chapters.

9mth

ACDPQSLv14

I have a question for you, as you have addressed the points I had grievances with. Do you think my review is negatively impacting your novel? If so, I am willing to delete it.

Sumit_Bhamer:okay

8mth

Sumit_BhamerAuthor

No, because of you I was able to correct mistakes . if you had not pointed it out. I would not had corrected it.So, don't delete your Review , I want people to point out my mistakes.

ACDPQS:I have a question for you, as you have addressed the points I had grievances with. Do you think my review is negatively impacting your novel? If so, I am willing to delete it.

8mth

ACDPQSLv14

cool

Sumit_Bhamer:No, because of you I was able to correct mistakes . if you had not pointed it out. I would not had corrected it.So, don't delete your Review , I want people to point out my mistakes.

8mth

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