There are 2 spelling mistakes that I see in the title alone. This tells me that the story will not be much better. I wish you, the author, nothing but the best. A little tip that I do in the story I write: before publishing a chapter, or title for that matter, input the text into ChatGPT and say 'correct this'.
Sumit_Bhamer
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LIKESumit_Bhamer:Thanks for your tip. English is not my main language but thank you for your advice
ACDPQS:No problem, it's not mine either. I'll check out your novel once it has reached 10+ chapters.
I have a question for you, as you have addressed the points I had grievances with. Do you think my review is negatively impacting your novel? If so, I am willing to delete it.
Sumit_Bhamer:okay
No, because of you I was able to correct mistakes . if you had not pointed it out. I would not had corrected it.So, don't delete your Review , I want people to point out my mistakes.
ACDPQS:I have a question for you, as you have addressed the points I had grievances with. Do you think my review is negatively impacting your novel? If so, I am willing to delete it.
Sumit_Bhamer:No, because of you I was able to correct mistakes . if you had not pointed it out. I would not had corrected it.So, don't delete your Review , I want people to point out my mistakes.