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atome_365
atome_365Lv41yr
2024-04-01 02:05

The idea is very good but the grammar is horrible, most sentences are confusing or downright nonsensical, I don't know if its a translation or what but I can't enjoy it at all.

Traveling through horror cinema, start with Supernatural.

MRCAT66
4.5
65 Chs

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MRCAT66
MRCAT66Author

I have written dozens of times that it is a translation, I am Brazilian and I am using a translator to change the language, so it is impossible to get something of good quality in grammar.

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Primordial_Two
Primordial_TwoLv11

you can put the translation into something like chatGPT to fix the grammar

MRCAT66:I have written dozens of times that it is a translation, I am Brazilian and I am using a translator to change the language, so it is impossible to get something of good quality in grammar.
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ScarletQC
ScarletQCLv14

Primordial_Two:you can put the translation into something like chatGPT to fix the grammar
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Primordial_Two
Primordial_TwoLv11

I was pitching Ideas alright

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MRCAT66
MRCAT66Author

as tradition I am writing my review, this book and a repostation in English, this book is being written by me in Portuguese Brazil and translated into English.If you like the story I ask you to comment and leave some stones.Hugs of the cat..

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Humbuub
HumbuubLv5

seems interesting but the story flow is bad and the dialogues looks like AI generated or translated from a CN fic. LoL the first dialogue alone turned me off already, nobody says "oh you convinced me". MC wasn't even convincing, just your typical Cardboard characters with soulless dialogues.

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BrokenandBored123
BrokenandBored123Lv3

The premise is good, but the grammar makes me want to cut out my eyes. You should definitely get some better software, or if it’s a person translating then find someone who can actually speak English. I am sure it’s much better in the original language.

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Readtilltheybleed
ReadtilltheybleedLv10

I’m currently 35 chapters in and it’s good. I would personally prefer it if the protagonist was a little more overpowered… but right now it’s looking like the author is going for a more balanced approach. 🤷🏻‍♂️ One thing new readers should be aware of is that the whole ‘horror movie’ aspect of the story is relatively separate from his day-to-day activities (unless you consider living in the TV series Supernatural as horror 😅) so this isn’t a hodgepodge amalgamation of a bunch of horror stories causing chaos and confusion, it’s ‘systemic’ and orderly. The characters represented aren’t perfectly representative to their theatrical counterparts either… as the author has gone for a reasonably more realistic portrayal, and while this particular alteration feels slightly off putting I believe it’s better for the overall plot. So if you happen to like Supernatural/horror and your looking for a little light reading then this story is a good choice.

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AlphaDragnir
AlphaDragnirLv2

A masterpiece. Please don't give up writing. I absolutely advise you to read this fanfic, I've been waiting for a supernatural fanfic for such a long time!

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Maluop
MaluopLv4

Interesting story, horrendous grammar

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Worldofimagination
WorldofimaginationLv12

It’s great work, author, keep it up, don’t give up. Many will come to criticize, but few know how hard it is for us BRs to translate into English… The FF idea is great, dude, very creative. I’ve always liked the Supernatural series, but unfortunately, there are few fanfics about it. It’s good to finally have some. The chapters have a good update rate, the characters are well written, and as the story progresses, you can see the evolution. Go for it!

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Aphrodite_111
Aphrodite_111Lv13

No bad. But for me, I've read so many novels where the MCs are getting stronger and stronger, I'm fed up! I'm looking for difference! Of course, I'm not saying don't read this FF. I read 2-3 chapters. It doesn't look bad.

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Gunkman
GunkmanLv14

The novel was a really fun read. but like most stories based in the supernatural universe, it has been dropped "temporarily"

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