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2024-04-28 13:38

Fun little wholesome slice of life novel. The translation is also quite readable.

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Alanray64
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I have only read the first lot of free chapters but from what I have read, I am actually am enjoying this novel. So we have the standard system novel however this one is tied to the MC making his suddenly acquired family of quads (from a drunken one night stand earlier with the campus belle), to be cared for, loved and raised right. From the get go there are road blocks appearing in the MCs path that he has to overcome. One being that Bai Susu is from some very wealthy family, with her life very much controlled in her growth. Her parents see her as a tool for benefits, whilst she only has family love from her grandfather. Basically the reader learns that the family will not allow such a relationship to develop as Ye Fan (MC) is not rich, nor from a notable background, and therefore won’t bring any benefits to the Bai Clan. The system rewards the MC with money and skills for doing acts of good for his family, from what I have read he has gained so far, one skill, body attributes increases, a pile of baby gear plus some parent gifts and, I think it was, 4 million 200 thousand dollars, yuan, not sure, though it seemed a pretty rounded type of returns. The negatives. Gender issues cropping up here and there, since this is being translated I would hope the person doing this job can improve his/her game. Also there is a number of grammar issues which are mild but for me I find it a bit jarring. Some leaps of assumptions that you can gloss over, I wasn’t phased by them but I did note them. Anyways, I don’t know what it is about this novel, however I was compelled to read all the free chapters as it is a nice feel good story that did make me smile reading of the antics happening. Overall, in my mind, I believe it is worth a read. I hope it appeals to others.

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