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2024-04-24 07:59

Potential banger. Definitely up there in my opinion to be a future contender in All-Time category just needs to be fine-tuned in some areas... Mainly that status screen issue everything else is my cup of tea though. Great work.

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StellNem
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Thanks bro, for the review, I really appreciate it. so what do you think are the issues? I can see how to fix them.

yggthedude
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Just the massive status cluster in the chapters it's sorta annoying to constantly scroll by, I seen some comments suggesting a more simplified way of condensing it like the (Town Level, Star Level, and etc...) definitely a good idea, i'm sure there's other suggestions as well. Once you find a groove that makes it more simplified and readable it will go along way for understanding the current abilities or analysis of others.

StellNem:Thanks bro, for the review, I really appreciate it. so what do you think are the issues? I can see how to fix them.
StellNem
StellNemAuthor

Oh yeah I've already done that, you can check the new aux chap, Info Dumps #1

yggthedude:Just the massive status cluster in the chapters it's sorta annoying to constantly scroll by, I seen some comments suggesting a more simplified way of condensing it like the (Town Level, Star Level, and etc...) definitely a good idea, i'm sure there's other suggestions as well. Once you find a groove that makes it more simplified and readable it will go along way for understanding the current abilities or analysis of others.
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StellNem
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Finally, the time has come for the Shameless Author Review, With the story reaching an acceptable progress, it's about time I explain things to my dear readers. First things first, is the story itself, what's it about, It's about our Main Character Draco Valenstein, he was a regular human on earth, Average at best, just started working in a company after graduating but died suddenly and unknowingly while coming back home. The story is about his transmigration to another world, a world of multiple Races, Evolutions, Wars, Techniques, Professions, And Ascension. This entire story, and possibly a few after it is a prequel to my Main story, which will go by the name of Everlasting Life Of The Creator, when it comes out, the story if released will have how the entire Stellverse was created from its beginning, the actual backstory of all MCs their true backgrounds, and how they came to become what they became. Draco currently lives in a minuscule part of the Stellverse( that is infinitely huge), and in his 'World' anyone who dies gets a wish before reincarnating, where they reincarnate and if it's in the same 'world', is a world of possibilities and the chances are tiny. Draco however, got 3 wishes, and he didn't go through a process after dying that most beings go through, though most do not lose their memories the process is a crucial part of the Stellverse that entirely changes the personalities of people at times. He wished for 3 cheats, for him at least they were, and he was sent to the other world as a demon, a lesser demon to be exact, one that was but an ant to a mere goblin, and he woke up exactly in front of a Forest that had just those waiting for him at its entrance, Goblins. The consequences afterward were a little shocking for a recently transmigrated human who also came with a novel readers' confidence, and the downsides of being a lesser demon, their Racial Traits. Now Draco was an angel as a human, he was too kind for his own good, but that's something that will come way later as such a Draco will no longer exist, what comes in his place... Is a Cunning, Scheming, Calculating, Ruthless Demon that will put chaos and terror in any being that meets him. Will his cheats actually help him? will they be of use in this world where leveling up is nothing but a small means of getting stronger? how will he fare against monsters who were dozens, hundreds, or even thousands of years older? and each year means more power in this world. Read up and discover! In this world full of eyes, no power comes without consequences, and being noticed by it only brings disaster to oneself, Unfortunately for Draco, he was noticed way too early. ------------------------------------- Ok, finished speaking in the author's tongue, let's get things straight, if you have any problems with the wishes know that no matter how OP they look some either have heavy consequences or will become negligible later on, of course, they still will be useful throughout the entire story, but their usefulness varies greatly. Alright, in most novels I read, people ask if there's romance, alright, listen, you can't expect a demon to care about a romantic partner alright? look as the story goes on, he might be led to take on a few, sure, but you can also expect there to be slaves, aside from future companions who will stand side by side with Draco. I currently do not know, but one thing you can be sure of is if someone is useless for a Demon they won't last long. now I did my best to not spoil y'all, if you still want me to explain further, then I can always make an auxiliary chapter full of info dumps until you drown. This is a WSA Entry so just throw your PS, GT, and gifts, thank you very much, this humble author will never not need them, so, please!

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