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Deuce_ex_Machina
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2024-10-31 16:11

The novel is one of the better ones in the system tycoon genre. It doesn't resort to truly unrealistic story elements and keeps the tycoon buildup relatively balanced with story pacing. The harem expansion proves to be a flaw though. As the story develops there is a tendency to marginalize many characters and plotlines to the point of forgetting characters completely or abandoning plotlines and even system rewards from those plotlines. Instances where some characters are set to have importance but utterly forgotten later happen often and even some are entirely written out of the story for no apparent reason other than the author forgot they existed and for story convenience. It seems the author is too interested later on in expanding the MC's range of tycoon influence. So abandoning earlier plot development for convenience becomes the norm. Hopefully, the author revisits and closes these loops. And remembering already established characters that have been marginalized without bloating the already sizeable harem.

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