The MCs body forging strength doesnt make sense, he becomes far stronger than anyone else with just body cultivation which is just a plot hole considering there’s no comprehension and it’s piling resources to strengthen the body after getting a body cultivation technique. His body strength makes even less sense when ascends to the spiritual realm and the body technique given freely is far stronger than sects with unity cultivators, on top of that he’s far younger than prodigies showered with resources for thousands of years, but somehow he’s used more resources in just 300 years. Also, the author is gooning, writing with one hand, why else would the MC meet the same female cultivator everytime he comes out of seclusion by chance even though their sects are extremely far apart. It’s worse later on when divine transformation cultivators are supposed to be instantly killed if they enter the void by space tears, but she fell into the void and ascended to the spirit realm ahead of time and the place she ended up is where the MC is even though the spirit realm is so huge it’s atleast the size of hundreds of small worlds.
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