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AshyAtmosphere
AshyAtmosphereLv141yr
2024-05-06 22:43

[Ratings are based off trial read standard] So ive read up to the start of payed chapters and honestly, for a trail read, this novel isnt that bad. The worldbuilding isnt very fleshed out if you are new to the genre but if you are enough is explained to not be totally confused. The system is also done pretty well with a lot of hard work and commitment needed for development , although it seems the alchemy cheat is a bit much with the context we have been given about the difficulty of pill refining in this world. The first few chapters obviously have the villian who bullies the mc, but the reason is clearly explained and is justifiable with the setting and is, i believe, temporarily relieved early on to start the actual story. Future Female MC has been introduced yet the description so far is vague but her character is slowly being drawn out and is quite respected and an actual character instead of 'ivory skin and peachy lips with cloths that barely cover her'. Also the daugher is really cute so far and isnt annoying which they sometimes can be unintentionally. Especially if she is taught the skills of her Mother and the MC, she could become a really good character in future chapters/arcs. Thank you for reading, im not ue to doing reviews but wanting to write more for trial reads up to the paywall.

Immortality Cultivation: I Farm in the System Space

Light Salted Fish
3.9
965 Chs

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Daoistm3tUvp
Daoistm3tUvpLv3

I want to ask you a question, Is it Harem ?

1yr
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Andres_Rodriguez_9404
Andres_Rodriguez_9404Lv13

As far as ch 32 no, later on? I dont know

Daoistm3tUvp:I want to ask you a question, Is it Harem ?
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Daoistm3tUvp
Daoistm3tUvpLv3

thanks

Andres_Rodriguez_9404:As far as ch 32 no, later on? I dont know
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Comic_Adict
Comic_AdictLv14

Is it a harem?

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RavRead
RavReadLv14

Up to chapter 116, there is no romantic development.

Comic_Adict:Is it a harem?
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RavRead
RavReadLv14

I'm at 198 right now and there's no romance yet. You ask about the raw, but I've been reading just this tranlslation all along.

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BlackPhantam
BlackPhantamLv4

I’m on chapter 420 there are no heroines Well except this one person who they causally mention as a Dao partner but really isn’t

Daoistm3tUvp:I want to ask you a question, Is it Harem ?
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Daoistm3tUvp
Daoistm3tUvpLv3

Thanks

BlackPhantam:I’m on chapter 420 there are no heroines Well except this one person who they causally mention as a Dao partner but really isn’t
6mth
Hansuli
HansuliLv15

Chapter 800 here and 2-3 women lust after him but no lover so far.

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Khalid97
Khalid97Lv15

A rare book about the actual cultivation journey of a person that feels reasonable. No plot armour or unnecessary conflict and lucky escapes.

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Mie_Kiauw_Jong
Mie_Kiauw_JongLv4

this is more like a slice of life- laid back story about MC, no rush, flowing like water that easily followed. MC is down to earth, development of story moving in steady pace. it's a good story 👍

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HADE_Thoppil
HADE_ThoppilLv11

I am a fan of cultivation novels and this novel is definitely readable. even though it's not the best still enough to pass time so give it a try.

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MMan1175
MMan1175Lv15

Starts strong with a reasonable protagonist and setting. He’s not getting everything handed to him and he’s not a reckless fool. However, in the end of the second volume and the beginning of the third, i.e. around chapter 300, he starts getting everything. Even stuff he didn’t know he wanted. I’m ok with that every so often but for the next 100 chapters he becomes completely passive yet grows faster than ever. It seems to me the author couldn’t come up with a good reason for the protagonist to grow so they had to take away their autonomy to get anywhere. Not to mention the path they’re taking to get the power is completely different than anything before. Also the relatively reserved cautious protagonist suddenly joins an established group way to quickly. Suddenly becoming life and death friends in just a couple of days.

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Figil
FigilLv11

After the 300th chapter, the realism decreases and the level of the novel drops. In general, it begins to describe illogical situations, fabricated without much thought. When you're in the harsh world of cultivation, it doesn't make sense to share secrets with near-strangers, pursue adventures that only bring you risks, and radically change your behavior from the initial chapters. Giving away what level alchemist you are puts you in a situation where they can kidnap you to use your talent, showing wealth that is beyond your level is also not recommended.

8mth
Christian_Olandag
Christian_OlandagLv2

Interesting story, a hidden gem.. although it's slow-paced story, you'll never regret reading this

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CynicalMaestro
CynicalMaestroLv4

Reveal spoiler

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1Kevoer
1KevoerLv13

It has good potential, a cohesive and very fluid story, which doesn't give the impression that the author is pushing the protagonist. It's worth reading.

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Rex_AutemVenatus
Rex_AutemVenatusLv15

Over all absolutely loved the book. If you enjoy culitvation novels this one is a great one to get immersed in. Other than minor translation issues I personally think the ending felt rushed, but thats pretty common in these books. Now I just wish there was more.

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