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2024-05-11 08:50

so to begin with the idea is fun and i liked it tbh, the other reviews complain about abbreviations but ig the author edited them. anyway the first chapters weren't that much, not bad but rather decent it lacked some consistency but it developed really good later on. the MC has the character of I wanna go home, and I liked how there's personality contradiction between new and ex personality but the pacing wasn't that good at first but it surprised me how good it turned kater on. the author is developing so the latter chapter are way better than the first ones. the MC is op, contradicted mix of extrovert and introvert yet good. pretty decent!

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wdym edit them ? ??😭😭 I just used chatgpt for grammar fix 🤌

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