writing is average, doest have any deep dialogs or interesting things in it. mc is a openbook for everyone ,he letterly says everting about his powers tho the first person he meets even tho there is no reason to. Mc is pretty guilable and bit dom, doest show any personality . total score 3.0 not good but i seen worst first atemps stories on this site
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