Review Detail of thehater in SpiderGwen: I have a system?!
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ArtoriaPendragon_:As for the mc acting like someone in her situation, you can attribute her calmness to her new knowledge. Having the knowledge of someone who’s been through way weirder (AKA Gwen Stacy) makes it hard to be surprised by such things. And what would freaking out do? It wouldn’t help anyone. And readers don’t like reading about an mc freaking out about their situation and reincarnation. Basically, most of your criticisms are fixed if you had read farther into the fic (as in like 10 chapters instead of seemingly 2-3).
I know right some times I surprise myself, this story has nothing to criticize it is all just bad the chapters are short, the characters don't feel like themselves, you made it An "AU" and only aged up 1 Character, The MC doesn't act like someone in her situation should. do you want me to go on?
ArtoriaPendragon_:Nice review lol. Very constructive💀
As for the mc acting like someone in her situation, you can attribute her calmness to her new knowledge. Having the knowledge of someone who’s been through way weirder (AKA Gwen Stacy) makes it hard to be surprised by such things. And what would freaking out do? It wouldn’t help anyone. And readers don’t like reading about an mc freaking out about their situation and reincarnation. Basically, most of your criticisms are fixed if you had read farther into the fic (as in like 10 chapters instead of seemingly 2-3).
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thehater:I know right some times I surprise myself, this story has nothing to criticize it is all just bad the chapters are short, the characters don't feel like themselves, you made it An "AU" and only aged up 1 Character, The MC doesn't act like someone in her situation should. do you want me to go on?
thehater:I know right some times I surprise myself, this story has nothing to criticize it is all just bad the chapters are short, the characters don't feel like themselves, you made it An "AU" and only aged up 1 Character, The MC doesn't act like someone in her situation should. do you want me to go on?
ArtoriaPendragon_:Ah, Nevermind. I just looked at your username and profile, you’re literally just a trollimage
Then you weren’t properly reading then lol. AU aspects are already propping up, and even more are popping up in recent chapters
thehater:I read all the chapters that were out when I posted this so no it was not fixed.
nope I read it alright. and I am not a troll I'm a hater get it right. "all trolls are haters but not all haters are trolls- thehater"
ArtoriaPendragon_:Then you weren’t properly reading then lol. AU aspects are already propping up, and even more are popping up in recent chapters
No, you obviously didn’t lol. And you’re a troll when you leave a review with no criticism, and the “criticism” you do have, is addressed/fixed within like 5-6 chapters.
thehater:nope I read it alright. and I am not a troll I'm a hater get it right. "all trolls are haters but not all haters are trolls- thehater"
What wasn’t fixed? I’d be interested to know. As from what I can tell, every criticism you’ve had, has all been fixed.
ArtoriaPendragon_:No, you obviously didn’t lol. And you’re a troll when you leave a review with no criticism, and the “criticism” you do have, is addressed/fixed within like 5-6 chapters.