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2024-04-17 02:10

I like it so far. I know a lot of people would want a Sukuna backstory (that's what this seems to be) and I find it interesting the route you're taking with it. I didn't expect Kenjaku to be introduced (this early anyway) and I like the way you did it. Uraume is more obvious, and i'd like to see why she's here and what she has to do with Kenjaku right now. Like other people have said. It's a bit confusing at times, and maybe not advertising it as a Sukuna backstory may not drive as much interest to your story. But I will admit it was surprising once I saw dismantle in bold in the beginning chapter. The posting schedule seems to be inconsistent, and maybe you could work on clarity more. But other than that, keep cooking.

Jujutsu Kaisen: The Heian Era

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Emmanuel_Capricorn
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Advice : Quickly take down the chat gbt ahh synopsis. it did not inspire confidence and would chase away most readers. other than that, I'll let you cook

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Achly_2780
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I like it so far. Make sure to keep it up original ganstaa aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa.

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Reveal spoiler

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