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2024-05-19 23:24

So far this move is pretty good but the biggest flaw is the mc stupidity, you would think a “genius” with insane plot armor would be a little smart but he’s not. He makes the worst possible choices and you’ll feel like shooting yourself after reading the free chapters. I hate the direction of this novel because of this which is why I’m not going to continue reading. Aside from these, I think it had a lot of potential to become a great novel.

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Blaze_Style
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*sigh* I made the mistake of buying chapters

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Blaze_Style:*sigh* I made the mistake of buying chapters
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ThirteenFrogs
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I would have to agree with the sentence that you will quickly feel like shooting yourself very soon due to the stupidity of all the young masters attacking the MC for no reason in literally every environment he goes to back to back.

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