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deadmandreaming
deadmandreamingLv149mth
2024-04-05 15:29

This story has quite an original concept, I like the Arbiters and the world building is interesting. Clashes between factions and colorful side characters give it a real anime feeling. However the language can be pretty rough and hard to follow at points. If the author puts more work into the grammar this could easily become a 5-star, I'm sure it will only get better over time!

Between Light and Darkness: The Void

CyberDevil_2051
4.8
125 Chs

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CyberDevil_2051
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WARNING ⚠️- FIRST VOLUME CONTAINS 4K WORDS (LONG CHAPTERS) GRAMMAR MISTAKES- YES UPDATE STABILITY- MINIMUM 3 CHS/WEEK INACTIVITY STATUS- CAN HAPPEN ANYTIME JUDGE STORY/NOVEL- DECIDE YOURSELF CRITICISM- ACCEPTED ✅ BAD REVIEWS- ACCEPTED ✅ PRAISE- ACCEPTED ✅ GOOD REVIEWS- ACCEPTED ✅ GIFTS- ACCEPTED ✅

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Hillstrider
HillstriderLv2

It's a very original concept, thrusting the reader into a game of chess. Not literally, you see. You'll have to read to understand what I mean. This is an action-packed novel, the fights might sometimes seem like the main character is overpowered, although I think that just adds spice. The writing can be enhanced and the author is actively improving, although for now I'd give the writing a passing grade as the author's thoughts and expressions are still being understood by the reader.

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YennuiXiel
YennuiXielLv2

You guys better read it and jump into the world of fantasy and enjoy. I must admit, I am completely engrossed in your world and cannot wait to reach the end. The way you have developed your characters and intricately crafted their journeys has left me emotionally invested in their fates. AJA AJA AJA FIGHTINGGGGG

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Tenzing_Choeying_5139
Tenzing_Choeying_5139Lv14

This story is very good and well structured. But there are times where I fright whose the main character, main character is Orion. Also I hope the Augtor puts in the PoV

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The_Ghost_Author
The_Ghost_AuthorLv1

I'm really proud of you. While reading the book, I feel like I'm watching anime in front of the television. I believe it is very difficult for writers to create this feeling. But you can achieve this beautifully. I see that you put a lot of effort. I hope you can get the reward of your efforts soon.[img=update][img=recommend]

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Pabay
PabayLv11

already got captivated by the first 4 chapters❤️. It is filled with beautiful characters who make the novel more intriguing. Beautifully written ❤️

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RandomiserUI
RandomiserUILv2

The Arbiter concept along with the overall world creation is well done! Interactions between the characters are great. However the grammar is a bit iffy but that’s alright we can improve upon that. Keep it up!

9mth
LONG_LIN
LONG_LINLv3

Wow, never thought it would be this interesting, keep up the good work author

9mth
Bistas_She
Bistas_SheLv4

A few chapters into this and I can already tell it's off to an entertaining start. The opening acts do a nice job setting the anime-stage. Fun read for lovers of this genre. I'd def recommend.

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