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2024-04-08 06:10

You ruined it Like you just throwing characters out there because it should be just be about Pokemon and classroom of elite but there are like 12 Characters that get put in front of you to understand them and we’re they come from because I don’t know a lot of the characters you should of started At childhood so you get world background and is there a pre teen Pokemon league so you can do a story about that then he goes to school and you slowly introduce characters and develop them and clans and special powers and development of the powers because he is op at the start with no development of course powerfully my can be fun but you did it wrong

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