Review Detail of ArtbusterBeeze in Dream Abyss

I liked everything about this world . The system there is pretty interesting and fun. It provides a unique blend on things. The characters were pretty good though , there are a few grammatical errors. They aren't that heavy but some common words. Also the use of terms like cut were done in overuse. It is funny but also . I believe you don't have to do it so long. That's just my opinion. Overall I found this world interesting and so should readers. This is full of cool action.