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2024-04-01 14:32

This is actually amazing. The grammer is superb and the storytelling is phenomenal. Keep going good sir!

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Absolutely amazing. I feel like this fan fiction is quite underrated Grammar is near flawless. But the most impressive thing is that the characters actually stick to their canon self- it is amazing how the author can flawlessly write character interactions who stay true to their personality. They also get expanded upon, but it just feels so natural that it makes them have more depth, without sacrifcing anything or making a character OOC even in the slightest I honestly have nothing much to say. The MC uses his powers quite well. In fact, he took advantage of Alchemy as soon as he learned what his powers were, and he also plans to take advantage of forging. It is great that the MC utilises his 'system' to the fullest potential- though I suppose he could also buy a lot of staff and then sell them, repeat the process and reach max level speech skill, but that is a bit unrealistic as he has just started. Of course, there is also the romance aspect- but not much is currently going on. His interactions with Hestia are great. But as my personal preference, I would hope this is a harem, as Danmachi is a harem anime and well... We have to stay true to the theme of this world, don't we? Anyway, just from what was shown- I believe in the author, and I have faith that whatever romance is written by him will be amazing.... Although I hope it will be a harem, it would be better to let nature take its course. If the MC has multiple partners interested in him, then the next course of action is obvious. And if not... well, as long as it seemed natural and not forced by any external circumstances, then that is fine too

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