Review Detail of jaro_onody in A Tensura Elf in Danmachi

the biggest problem i have with fiction like this is the mc that feels the need to cath up on the story or story protagonist . im just like why, i dont realy understand that.you have only 10 years before canon starts fuck that you just rushed in and now youre in orario ,weak as fuck with op system that can give skills ,if you survive that is. and that is just not logical or intresting . even without the backstory this feels on unimaginative like most danmachi fics =mc get cheat power ---mc doest think and rushes to orario---mc strugels a bit but gets stronger---mc follows og story abit ----this the point most autors stop writeing or put the story on hiuatus becouse they lack creativtie