Review Detail of Deippy_Deippy in Domination: Limitless Growth

Writing quality- A pretty easy 5 star, no noticeable grammar or spelling errors. And the story flows pretty well. Updating stability - 5 stars Sorry development - 4.5 stars. I think that each event is well thought out and satisfying to read, however the reason it is 4.5 and not 5 stars is because of a few minor things that I think maybe could have been a bit more fleshed out. One of these examples is robins incredibly high talent, and mcs lack of ability to learn ovservation haki after 10 years of training. Though the author said this was an au and he didn’t want heroines to be useless, I feel like there could have been a better way than just giving her an insane amount of talent. Like making it so she is already very strong (at around crocodiles level) before she gets on his ship, or exploring some of the busted use cases of her devil fruit like shigan and what not. Character design - 4 stars, I think the characters are well written and are pretty similiar to the anime. The reason it is 4 and not 5 is because it feels like the mc doesn’t really have a distinct personality and instead feels like he is trying to act cool/down to earth, he also acts like a bit of an outsider, as though he is not really apart of the world. Some people like this, but I think it sort of “de-animefy’s” an anime/manga fanfic. World building - 5 stars. It’s one piece. Overall rating - 4.7/5 or 9.4/10