webnovel
nualess
nualessLv311mth
2024-05-11 23:38

I would recommend it to those that enjoy apocalypse work

Liked by 2 people

LIKE
empty img

No replies. Be the first!

Other Reviews
Jackson_0005
Jackson_0005Lv15
Mister_SPO
Mister_SPOLv4

Another good novel from the author with a great premise not original but at least well done with a consistent updates schedule but at the end of the day nothing is perfect. So for the flaws that I found in this novel : -well first there’s a lot of repetition like in his other novels idk if it is intentional to reach words counts or is it bcz of some app that he use to correct the grammar and spelling mistakes, don’t get me wrong there’s not that many mistakes If there’s any tbh I don’t remember if there is, so using those app maybe the reason in every it say the same thing over and over again just with different world -second like his other novels the MC start already with all the knowledge about magics and runes but we don’t know how did he get that knowledge or why did he even having, like in abyss lord we learn that the mc basically was the pioneer of rune mastery, in this novel instead we learn that he was from the same original universe zatiel came from the AI chip and all and reincarnated in the same universe too in the race that he created but zatiel never knew about it or mentioned it in that novel, okay I get the author just like the concept of the statut panel to easily explain his power progression, but for me taking the part of learning and discovering runes again is kinda dissapointing and how does those runes even works in this universe bcz u said the laws of physics don’t work anymore and work with different laws and rules so I just don’t understand how they work and all that knowledge just becomes deus machina to come in clutch when they’re in a pitch -third the timespan/timeline of the story isn’t quit clear maybe it’s just me -the MC is kinda too much heroic like he doesn’t have what to be a king I guess that’s what happen when u are depravita of wrath it’s kinda isn’t the ideal race to rule a kingdom, I hope in the future he will fuse it with its counterpart one that doesn’t rely on emotional power like zatiel did by combining the abyssal with the angelic Well this is my review I recommend reading this novel and the author other novels Ps: author I hope u wouldn’t succumb to temptation like u did last time and go the harem route just keep it one single female lead

Related Stories

Re: Evolution Online

On just another normal Monday, a new virtual reality game called "Evolution Online" launched out of nowhere and took the world by storm. People were blown away by the game’s hyper-realistic features and endless adventures. Everyone from small companies to big corporations and governments scrambled to get a foothold on this mysterious video game. But what they didn't know was that this game was actually a tutorial for the upcoming apocalypse that was about to hit the planet! The game was a precursor to the Earth's first evolution, where mana was going to be unleashed into the real world! Liam, a high school student who had faced numerous setbacks in his life, turned to 'Evolution Online' in the hope of changing his fate, but instead, he got trapped in the game's twisted world, and things went from bad to worse. When the apocalypse finally arrived, Liam barely managed to escape, but his situation didn't improve. Along with millions of others, he died a miserable death, unable to fight back and filled with regret. However, Liam's story didn't end there. He found himself inexplicably transported back in time before everything started! Armed with the knowledge of what was to come, Liam was determined to become the strongest and most powerful player, unleashing destruction upon the world that had ruined him before! This time, things were going to be different! ******************* Discord Link for chatting with author and character art https://discord.gg/XS7gWScKn8

Yolohy · Fantasy
4.8
1426 Chs

Primordial Villain with a Slave Harem

Quinlan, a simple office worker finds himself transmigrated to an extremely dangerous fantasy land as a level 1 Commoner with nothing to his name but his wits - and a unique gift that accompanied his teleportation. No one in Thalorind could have predicted that this unassuming arrival would one day rise to the top, redefining the very meaning of the term 'power'... And that he may have achieved said result by joining a criminal organization and clawing his way through its ranks. In the beginning, Quinlan was painfully weak and alone but thanks to his severe trust issues, joining a team was... hard. However, he soon noticed that a lot of people have collars around their necks in this world... People that couldn't exactly betray him. Follow Quinlan's journey as he grows in strength, amasses wealth, fights to the death, and meets lovely ladies. ... Discord: https://discord.gg/bjunEkswQ3 ... After writing over 750 chapters, here’s what you should know: 1. About the beginning: The early chapters are a bit rough. I'm not saying that it's horrible, in fact, I believe the story to be very enjoyable right from chapter 1. But, at the end of the day, this is my first original novel, and I stumbled in some areas, especially with the MC's attitude. He's too reserved and occasionally too "simpy" with the first female lead. However, the MC grows into a confident, powerful, and composed figure. No long-term cringe. He becomes the kind of MC you want to root for. 2. Quinlan’s morality: He’s not a cruel, sadistic villain. Most of the time, he won't even be acting like a real villain, only when pushed to the limit. Meaning he won't torture puppies or civilians for fun while cackling manically. However, he’s greedy, shameless, and opportunistic. If the lives of his loved ones are at stake and he can only save them by burning a city with innocents inside down, he’ll do it. He's ruthless toward strangers when necessary, but doesn't delight in cruelty. 3. Regarding slaves: Yes, Quinlan becomes a slave master. However, he treats all his women—free or enslaved—with care and respect. 4. More than smut: Every love interest has a real story, a real presence. No girl will be left behind. As of Chapter 750, Quinlan has 7 lovers and a few more "in-development" love interests. This is not a "catch them all" story, adding one girl every 20 chapters. I prefer harems made up of girls with richly developed characters over giant harems full of shallow ladies. Quality over Quantity. 5. Balanced storytelling: My aim was to create a work where romance, action, and slice-of-life blend together naturally. There’s high-stakes action, power progression, romantic developments, comedy, and some chill downtime to let both the characters and the readers breathe. 6. Weak-to-Strong Progression: Quinlan will become OP. But he rises slowly, not overnight. His journey will hopefully feel earned. 7. Not every female character listed in the fandom is a love interest: Some women are important to the plot but are not part of the harem or a planned to be, such as his two mothers. 8. No Yuri. No NTR. That's it, thank you for taking your chance on my novel! I'll make a promise to you, showing how much I believe you'll love the novel if you get over the somewhat bumpy beginning! If you read 750 chapters and hate the story even after investing so much time into it, then you may burn me alive!

NecroBin · Fantasy
4.6
775 Chs