Review Detail of ThePandaCritic in Convict to King

Thoughts it's an interesting idea. The grammar is great. The presentation of the status in most of the chapters is awesome. Problems, first Idk If ur waiting to make the connection or not but the system choice for a rapper for the Mc whn the only connection to rap for him is jail time and where he lived. There seem to be no history there of a young someone who's trying but don't hv a break or something thts rooted in rap hence why the system choose him and also a rap system. Also the Mc seem to not be interested in finding this out also and another thing which is forgotten or maybe it turn into the butler, the system is sentient like n the Mc is just chill with that WHY also that aspect of the system is not explore after tht. Another thing is since the system cn create a human per say and money and also a house with equipments, it begs the question is this magic or mechanical because again this doesn't seem to bother the Mc 1 bit like how's this happening. Also I'm curious why hv the Mc use a label whn theres SoundCloud or Spotify to grow ...Maybe sing in the streets or at those pop up bars with a little crowd to build a following.