Review Detail of AuthorEgo in Destined Rebirth
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I like your world building a lot! I was a little confused by the first chapter explaining the world, but once the story started I was intrigued. There are quite a few miss spellings but easily fixable with a read through. Looking forwards to where it goes, and your journey.
Destined Rebirth
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Thank you so much for taking the time to read my work and share your thoughts with me! I'm thrilled to hear that you enjoyed the world-building aspect of the story. Your feedback on the This Book is incredibly valuable to me —I'll definitely take another look at it I appreciate you pointing out the misspellings. I'll make sure to do a thorough read-through to catch and correct any errors before the next draft.
Just read the recent chapters, looking a lot better already. Your stats pages are really clean, keep up the good work. I just started my first book a couple weeks ago too, it is definitely a struggle to edit something you've already posted. I cut two chapters out because I felt like mine wasn't quick enough but you get right to it. I would be thankful if you could give me some feedback too!
Shresth_Srivastava_8768:Thank you so much for taking the time to read my work and share your thoughts with me! I'm thrilled to hear that you enjoyed the world-building aspect of the story. Your feedback on the This Book is incredibly valuable to me —I'll definitely take another look at it I appreciate you pointing out the misspellings. I'll make sure to do a thorough read-through to catch and correct any errors before the next draft.