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2024-03-18 18:03

I got to say this story really have a good promise, even though its jusr the beginning I'm already hooked bru 🥺

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Read 100 chapters, gonna be honest it was a bit bland The early start was actually not bad, interesting start with the whole vigilante to hero shtick But in the later chapters, things got way more hectic, maybe like chapter 40ish, suddenly marvel characters are in the universe which was fine. However, the introduction of Tony and Fury was really bad because they just showed up and told Peter he was technically their property and barely contributed anything but giving Peter even more depression, meeting one other mutant, and a new suit ( that Peter designed ) My biggest complaint would be how much of a BITCH Peter is. Like yeah, I understand making a teenager spider-man a bit angsy, but like 100 chapters and it’s still not resolved. “Oh yeah I wished I just died right there” at literal chapter 90. “Why did I become Spider-Man does anyone even like me, why am I Spider-Man.” There is barely any character development. There was his relationship with Nejire which started out well, but it became really apparent that Nejire was Peter’s emotion support with Peter not doing anything for Nejire, and Nejire having to constantly worry and help out Peter was painful to read. It should be called Deppression man in MHA who has Spider-Man powers, because from the very get go, it was him being sad Also, chapter 90 and could not defeat Lizard. One without any intelligence too. And he’s still like “I wish he drowned me right there.” After willingly going after Lizard when he had the choice not to, because he literally smashed his head into pavement not long ago

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