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HumptyDumptyDatAss
HumptyDumptyDatAssLv48mth
2024-05-25 04:28

It's not really well written, the author heavily uses AI but because he can't speak English well, the text isn't checked leading to errors. The MC is being crippled for the sake of plot. The MC is faster than the fastest Asgardian soldier, yet refuses to dodge any attacks leading to his bones somehow getting broken by a single punch from an unnamed Frost Giant, like this shouldn't even be happening. He wields a spear yet refuses to thrust, rather he swings it around like a sword. The MC has enough heat to melt a kingdom yet that isn't enough to melt some snow that is covering a village? Instead he has to draw on the Sun for extra heat? It was literally stated he could melt Uru and reduce it to Ash with ease. Except he was also trapped in Uru shackled just before that... The other characters are also being crippled too. An Asgardian General was oneshot because a Frost Giant, probably Laufey I stopped reading at this point, conjured an ice spear as the General charged at him... Amora, by Loki's word was a very poweful sorceress, was somehow oneshot too, want to know how? She was encased in ice. It wasn't instant, the guy had a whole monologue yet she just didn't cast a single spell because of the "pain". Amora is also a Yandere, which if its your thing, ok, but to me it got annoying real fast.

Baldur Odinson: God of Light

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Hello everyone, I'm Lonely Translator an I'll like to mention that the book is not my own creation. While I would have appreciated the opportunity to credit the author, I'm uncertain if they are present on this platform. I acknowledge that my translation may not be flawless, but I sincerely hope that you all find enjoyment in it.

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ShuYme
ShuYmeLv5

The mc is supposed to be a god but gets beaten by frost giant, the plot is so forced and unnatural

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LastGod
LastGodLv5

Apocalypse power level is waay to much. The way u put he hes stronger then the phoenix a cosmic power. If your going by comic book power levels this MFer is no where near odins power. As odin force is a semi cosmic force. So where are u getting ur power levels from its not comics and it not MCU?

8mth
Goutham_Cp
Goutham_CpLv4

it's a nerf fest. the amount of times i wanted to punch my screen is too much for comfort soooo i dropped it at the x-men arc

8mth
AlexCyberHeart
AlexCyberHeartLv2

1/5/4/3/3 A.I writing is used too much is this fic other then that well the concept is good and the characters are fine

9mth
The_Weird_Magician
The_Weird_MagicianLv4

marvel lord balder # I think LordVoid good book on webnovel

9mth
itz_scaro
itz_scaroLv14

can't say much about it, as it's only 9 chapters rn, but it seems intriguing this is my first time seeing a baldur fanfic

9mth
Raptor2244
Raptor2244Lv14

Reveal spoiler

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_VOIDLESS_
_VOIDLESS_Lv11

Look i know you're not the author but just a translator who is doing his best to make this readable, I've read the og and iIknow you've done a decent job about it. But my God do I have something to say You should have been just an enhanced human with long lifespan, that way it would have made more sense for the rubbish I am seeing. So far the mc has no sense of agency he was complaining about Thanos like four chapters ago now after almost 1500 years he has not made any significant progress to show that type of agency, now from what I've read from the og i know it will not get any better and that's sad to me

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