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4Leafy
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2024-03-18 19:15

“A Reincarnator’s Guide To Godhood: From Mortal To Immortal” follows the well-worn path of a reborn/reincarnation protagonist with a system, offering little in the way of innovation for seasoned readers of the genre. While competently written, it fails to deliver anything truly unique or refreshing. Perhaps my expectations were too high, but I couldn't help but feel disappointed by the lack of originality. However, I remain hopeful that future installments may offer something fresh and compelling to redeem the series. I feel like there none things new in novel. It the same old reborn, reincarnation, system, etc and etc… Maybe I just burn out from reading so many novel and seeing ”author” on WebNovel stealing Chinese novel(MTL) and claiming it as their own then locking the chapters so you have to pay to read. I have no problem founding the original source for that Chinese novel but it annoying to see it happen.

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ReadMyriads
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Thanks for the feedback! I will definitely incorporate some original concepts that may appeal to you.

ReadMyriads
ReadMyriadsAuthor

Thank you so much for your continued support, I just wanted to let you know that I really appreciate it!

4Leafy
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This will be my last comment until you get 50 chapter cuz I want you to cook. Here are my thoughts/review on chapter 10: The introduction of the dimension rift function in Chapter 10 raises some apprehensions for me as a reader. While the concept itself is intriguing, I worry that it might lead the novel down the path of becoming a world-hopping story. As an avid reader, I believe that strong character development and immersive world-building are essential elements of a compelling narrative. However, in world-hopping novels, the constant shift to new settings can sometimes detract from these aspects. Instead of delving deeper into the existing characters and their world, the focus often shifts to introducing new environments and characters with each jump. This approach can be detrimental as it may prevent readers from fully connecting with the story and investing in the characters' journeys. Additionally, it places a heavy burden on the author to continuously create new and engaging settings and characters to maintain the reader's interest. While the introduction of the dimension rift function presents exciting possibilities, I hope that the author will balance its usage effectively to ensure that the core elements of the story, such as character development and world-building, remain central. By doing so, the novel can maintain its appeal and keep readers engaged in the protagonist's journey without sacrificing depth and continuity. Lastly Question on the system, is it one of these system when the host die the system die/destroy or it is one of these system when the host die the system can just find another host? Just wanna know what type of system it is?!

ReadMyriads:Thank you so much for your continued support, I just wanted to let you know that I really appreciate it!
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Thanks for your feedback, as for my novel, I would like to build on this world much more before he returns to the main world to keep the intrigue of the story as I also strongly believe in world and character building settings, as for the system it is one with the host, if the host dies the system will naturally disappear.

4Leafy:This will be my last comment until you get 50 chapter cuz I want you to cook. Here are my thoughts/review on chapter 10: The introduction of the dimension rift function in Chapter 10 raises some apprehensions for me as a reader. While the concept itself is intriguing, I worry that it might lead the novel down the path of becoming a world-hopping story. As an avid reader, I believe that strong character development and immersive world-building are essential elements of a compelling narrative. However, in world-hopping novels, the constant shift to new settings can sometimes detract from these aspects. Instead of delving deeper into the existing characters and their world, the focus often shifts to introducing new environments and characters with each jump. This approach can be detrimental as it may prevent readers from fully connecting with the story and investing in the characters' journeys. Additionally, it places a heavy burden on the author to continuously create new and engaging settings and characters to maintain the reader's interest. While the introduction of the dimension rift function presents exciting possibilities, I hope that the author will balance its usage effectively to ensure that the core elements of the story, such as character development and world-building, remain central. By doing so, the novel can maintain its appeal and keep readers engaged in the protagonist's journey without sacrificing depth and continuity. Lastly Question on the system, is it one of these system when the host die the system die/destroy or it is one of these system when the host die the system can just find another host? Just wanna know what type of system it is?!
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"Reincarnator’s Guide To Godhood: From Mortal To Immortal" is a captivating journey through the trials and tribulations of a seasoned reincarnator navigating a world where power determines life and death. The first chapter sets the stage with an intense clash of steel, immersing readers into a realm where alliances shift like the wind and power reigns supreme. The protagonist's raw desperation and unwavering determination leap off the page, drawing readers into a world where every decision carries weight and consequences ripple through the fabric of reality. What sets this story apart is its intricate exploration of the protagonist's past lives and the toll that reincarnation has taken on their psyche. As they reflect on their journey through multiple lifetimes, readers are treated to glimpses of the protagonist's evolution from a humble disciple to a formidable force to be reckoned with. The Clock of Rebirth adds an intriguing layer of mystery, promising immortality while exacting a heavy toll on the soul—a premise that leaves readers eager to uncover the secrets hidden within its ancient depths. With each reincarnation, the stakes grow higher, and the protagonist's struggle to transcend their mortality becomes increasingly compelling. The blend of intense action, intricate world-building, and introspective reflection creates a narrative that is both exhilarating and thought-provoking. As the protagonist faces their eleventh and final life, readers are left on the edge of their seats, eagerly anticipating the next chapter in this epic tale of power, destiny, and the pursuit of godhood.

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