Lost interest in it pretty fast. Very cliche.

I read up to Chapter 40 and I'm dissatisfied about how the story is written in the 1st point of view much like narration or diary few dialogue and interactions with other characters making the story like monotone Narration. The annoying part is the MC often handed his Made up Jutsus demanded by Hokage for preservation with some price or compensation that didn't even explain what price/ cost he receive.

It reads like a summery of a story or even a diary.

MC is way too dumb for my tastes[img=disgusted]..

Ahem good narrative, grammar doesn't matter to me, I like the character of the mc, good strength development, the interactions are good I guess although there is a need to improve on that.

At first I thought this story was great, I thought it was 5 stars because I really liked it sadly as time went by every chapter that was once good is now mediocre. Author I recommend you to read from the beginning your own story and think if you are really following a good story line or just writing for the sake of writing.

Te da la impresión de ser naruto pero bastante diferente con una pizca de "slice of life" y hace que la historia sea más tranquila de lo normal. Perfecto si te interesa ese tipo de historias

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