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Okoroego_Paul
Okoroego_PaulLv15mth
2024-06-17 00:32

The writing is well articulated And the story, world background and character design are top notch Indeed this is the work of someone who's brilliant. I will give you five Stars Because is worth

Zosia: Quick Transmigration System

XNight_Glow
4.5
131 Chs

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XNight_Glow
XNight_GlowAuthor

Shameless author here to give her book a five star review 😁. Do add to your library, share with your friends and support me with power stones, golden ticket, coins, gifts etc ☺️😉

7mth

Xmystiq
XmystiqLv2

Author please update faster.... keep up the good work 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

7mth
DaoistaMmS2L
DaoistaMmS2LLv14

The jumping around and rushing is this novel is leaving me confused and wondering why the world endings didn’t have a wrap up. Also, I like to use the audio feature but the way that the system text is formatted, the audio skips it completely which defeats the purpose of listening to the story. The story plot is interesting but the delivery of it needs some help. That being said, I will continue to read the story since the plot itself is interesting.

2mth
Onunkwo_Chidinma_8483
Onunkwo_Chidinma_8483Lv3

Keep up the good work author 💪💯. 🤠🤠🤠🤠🤠🤠🤠🤠

7mth
xEvelyn123
xEvelyn123Lv13

A good work..... Different genres and different twist. If you ignore some Grammatical errors which are not really noticeable, and read up to the later chapters, you would love the book.

7mth
Winx1
Winx1Lv11

Love the work. ....... The book that made me come on Webnovel couldn't find it and rather found this. This could keep me busy. I hope to get more from you author.

7mth
Roses6_ba
Roses6_baLv14

A whole new type of novel with a system with both mother / son benefitting. I like that she’s competent in combat and has a space to hide in dangerous circumstances . Good read.

2mth
pressuresore
pressuresoreLv13

Writing Quality: Minor mistakes, tolerable. Story Development: The arcs are fast-paced and there 's nothing wrong with that but, it's not seamlessly done. Nevertheless, you can still understand the story. The plot is promising. Character Design: There are inconsistencies with the characters, especially the protagonist. 1) She was a world class assassin but she's easily started. She's also easily embarrassed. There 's also the fact that she always brushes something off her mind, though it can still pass off as thinking of what's more important. Still, I don't think it matches her background. I forgot the other things. 2)For the side characters, I would've liked it more if they'd have a character development. Flat characters are fine if not everyone is flat. However, it seems that only those "good" people would have round characters. 3) Unreasonable characters are also fine but, don't make everyone unreasonable. There's always that one person in a group but a group can't survive if everyone is like that. 4) I think that's it, or maybe I forgot. Updating Stability: I don't know. World Background: It's being built as she goes back to the space.

3mth
CHIHUB
CHIHUBLv2

More grease to your elbow or more so fingers to type more chapters for me to read 😊😊

7mth
DaoistecqtnX
DaoistecqtnXLv12

it's a mess. The story keeps jumping from one thing to the next without proper explanation or any description of details, where it begins and no details provide to time skips. its very dificult to engage with the story. just like reading a summary, no emotions attachment.

1mth
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