Review Detail of M00semaster5 in Fate/ Zero : Flugel follows the war

the concept is cool and it has interesting ideas but god damn the english is so awful. in the same paragraph you will be misspelling names and calling female servants and saying they’re guys which could he looked over if the chapters weren’t so short. on top of all that i think the overall story telling at least so far(the first fight with gilgamesh just ended) hasn’t been very good and kind of scatter brained. overall this isn’t worth the read at this stage, maybe if this got edited and sort of polished it would but so far not worth it.