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2024-06-29 08:05

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Zhawan2002
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what a trash review, I just finish reading it and it's not that slow at all, your probably one of those brainrot readers who can't stand reading 1 paragraph.

Silver_mirror
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Forced plot. 1st chapter alone has so much force that entire star wars verse pales in comparison.

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